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I'd like feedback on my article: Energy Resources: Russia Joins China - The...

  1. ManIntheMiddleqg profile image52
    ManIntheMiddleqgposted 3 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Energy Resources: Russia Joins China - The Call for Help (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. Jeremy Gill profile image96
    Jeremy Gillposted 3 weeks ago

    1) Remove extra white space between capsules.
    2) Use italics sparingly, not for entire paragraphs.
    3) Make sure the word count exceeds 600. Shoot for 1000.
    4) Proofread. For instance, nation's should be nations (no possessive).

    I've noticed your Hubs are consistently too short, there's no way to bypass that minimum word count. Best of luck.

  3. ManIntheMiddleqg profile image52
    ManIntheMiddleqgposted 3 weeks ago

    Thanks.

  4. Rupert Taylor profile image99
    Rupert Taylorposted 3 weeks ago

    There are lots of grammar errors. Try pasting your text into a free program such as Grammarly to catch some of them

    "Furthermore, Europe has already ridden (? as in past participle of "ride") in parts of western Asia as (in) an attempt to spread the love of alcohol and cultural norms." Rather bold claim; where's your supporting evidence?

    Also, outbound links are not a good idea. HubPages wants articles to be complete in themselves, readers should not have to go elsewhere for information. And, why would you want to send someone away from your page?

 
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