Please can you take a look and give me your input

  1. TessSchlesinger profile image95
    TessSchlesingerposted 6 weeks ago

    https://hubpages.com/religion-philosoph … of-the-Dog

    Yes, it's unexpectedly long. That's because I wanted to explain that Chinese astrology does not 'foretell' the future so much as determine the general weather, and whether it's a good thing to go out or not.

    Also, because dog years are years of change, innovation, revolution, action, etc., I wanted to be a bit careful about making claims like that.

    So it's a lot longer than my normal articles.

    I hope that's okay.

    I'm still adusting keywords.

    1. tritrain profile image82
      tritrainposted 5 weeks agoin reply to this

      I like it.  The only part that might benefit from a change would be the "Inner Animal" section.  Since they are individually written in more detail, it would be good to highlight the list, maybe in bold or with a simple table.

 
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