I'd like feedback on my article: Find out What My “Four Times Victim” of...

  1. bizna profile image73
    biznaposted 3 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Find out What My “Four Times Victim” of Attempted Rape Taught Me. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. pen promulgates profile image41
    pen promulgatesposted 3 weeks ago

    Hey Bizna,
    It's awful that you had to face those situations, it takes courage to write something this serious.
    Here are my observations:
    Your title is difficult. It's more of a blog post type. Rework the title - to be Google search friendly.
    At times, your writing sounds a little direct.
    Hope your images are legal to use.
    Good luck.

    1. bizna profile image73
      biznaposted 3 weeks agoin reply to this

      Observation taken. Thank you for your time and comment.

 
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