I'd like feedback on my article: Golf Course Jobs For Career-Bound People

  1. GolfNewsUS profile image40
    GolfNewsUSposted 4 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Golf Course Jobs For Career-Bound People (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image100
      theraggededgeposted 4 weeks agoin reply to this

      Hi there,

      There are several issues with your article, the main one being all those links. I'm not sure if you are promoting an organisation you are involved with or not. If you are, then self-promotion is not permitted. Otherwise, you can only link to the same domain twice, maximum.

      Your image source should be cited and images MUST be legal to use. You can't take any image and republish it. As a sports journalist, I expect you are aware of that.

      Formatting needs cleaning up. Mixing bullet points and numbering in the same capsule looks a bit odd. Try some straight paragraphs. Also, you don't need sub-headings for images--leave them blank.

      Beware of keyword stuffing. 'Golf' appears way too often--79 times, in fact. Google will hate it.

      Hope that helps.

 
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