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Newbie seeking a critique.

  1. SimeyC profile image89
    SimeyCposted 8 years ago

    OK I'm a newbie to Hubpages - seeking a critique on my first hub.

    A couple of questions:
    1) Not enough content? Do I need to explain more about the pros and cons of Project Natal?
    2) I'm also a Squidoo user and have listed my Squidoo Lens - is that a big No No on Hubpages? Would it be better to enahnce the Lens with similar, but unique content.

    Any general advice you can give me would be a great help!

    http://hubpages.com/hub/ProjectNatal

  2. Anti-Valentine profile image92
    Anti-Valentineposted 8 years ago

    This thread will explain everything.

    http://hubpages.com/forum/topic/18634

    Sorry Ron. You snooze, you lose.

    1. Ron Montgomery profile image60
      Ron Montgomeryposted 8 years ago in reply to this

      He's already seen it..

      So who was snoozing?....

      Zing!

      1. SimeyC profile image89
        SimeyCposted 8 years ago in reply to this

        LOL I figured I'd ask for a critique before I start following the wonderful advice on that entry!

        1. Anti-Valentine profile image92
          Anti-Valentineposted 8 years ago in reply to this

          Wonderful advice? SimeyC, Ron's just trying to sell you something. We were posting about it just now. I think he's a terrorist. tongue

          1. Ron Montgomery profile image60
            Ron Montgomeryposted 8 years ago in reply to this

            No man,I just love my country too much to let it become a haven for Muslim Communist Kenyans.

            Check and Mate, mate

            1. Anti-Valentine profile image92
              Anti-Valentineposted 8 years ago in reply to this

              Is that a dig at fierycj? 'Cause it's not me!



              You took way too long with that comeback, so points off there, "buddy". Checkmate, I think not. We're not playing chess anyway. tongue

              1. Ron Montgomery profile image60
                Ron Montgomeryposted 8 years ago in reply to this

                I thought you were cj!

                1. Anti-Valentine profile image92
                  Anti-Valentineposted 8 years ago in reply to this

                  No...

                  So you did all this for nothing?

                  You're probably so used to scrapping with him, you thought it was him. lol

      2. Anti-Valentine profile image92
        Anti-Valentineposted 8 years ago in reply to this

        If he has seen it, it's because I probably told him about it...before you got here. I didn't see him post anything there, yet.

        Um, Zing!

  3. Dame Scribe profile image61
    Dame Scribeposted 8 years ago

    I think it looks great Simey smile welcome to HubPages. don't mind the silly ones kickin round the forums big_smile

  4. Ludo profile image62
    Ludoposted 8 years ago

    Looks good bud, keep up the good work wink

  5. Rik Ravado profile image91
    Rik Ravadoposted 8 years ago

    Good first Hub, well written (the most important bit!).  Good mix of capsules.  Might benefit from breaking up the text a bit more; for example by adding more H2 headings (this is good for search engine optimisation, particularly if you include some keywords eg 'project natal') 
    Yes might benefit from more content but short hubs can perform well as most of the ads appear 'above the fold' anyway (near the top)

    Excellent first Hub - well done!

 
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