Newbie seeking a critique.

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   SimeyCposted 8 years ago

   OK I'm a newbie to Hubpages - seeking a critique on my first hub.
   
   A couple of questions:
   1) Not enough content? Do I need to explain more about the pros and cons of Project Natal?
   2) I'm also a Squidoo user and have listed my Squidoo Lens - is that a big No No on Hubpages? Would it be better to enahnce the Lens with similar, but unique content.
   
   Any general advice you can give me would be a great help!
   
   http://hubpages.com/hub/ProjectNatal

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   Anti-Valentineposted 8 years ago

   This thread will explain everything.
   
   http://hubpages.com/forum/topic/18634
   
   Sorry Ron. You snooze, you lose.

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      Ron Montgomeryposted 8 years ago in reply to this

      He's already seen it..
      
      So who was snoozing?....
      
      Zing!

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         SimeyCposted 8 years ago in reply to this

         LOL I figured I'd ask for a critique before I start following the wonderful advice on that entry!

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            Anti-Valentineposted 8 years ago in reply to this

            Wonderful advice? SimeyC, Ron's just trying to sell you something. We were posting about it just now. I think he's a terrorist.

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               Ron Montgomeryposted 8 years ago in reply to this

               No man,I just love my country too much to let it become a haven for Muslim Communist Kenyans.
               
               Check and Mate, mate

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                  Anti-Valentineposted 8 years ago in reply to this

                  Is that a dig at fierycj? 'Cause it's not me!
                  
                  
                  
                  You took way too long with that comeback, so points off there, "buddy". Checkmate, I think not. We're not playing chess anyway.

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                     Ron Montgomeryposted 8 years ago in reply to this

                     I thought you were cj!

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                        Anti-Valentineposted 8 years ago in reply to this

                        No...
                        
                        So you did all this for nothing?
                        
                        You're probably so used to scrapping with him, you thought it was him.

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         Anti-Valentineposted 8 years ago in reply to this

         If he has seen it, it's because I probably told him about it...before you got here. I didn't see him post anything there, yet.
         
         Um, Zing!

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   Dame Scribeposted 8 years ago

   I think it looks great Simey welcome to HubPages. don't mind the silly ones kickin round the forums

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   Ludoposted 8 years ago

   Looks good bud, keep up the good work

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   Rik Ravadoposted 8 years ago

   Good first Hub, well written (the most important bit!).  Good mix of capsules.  Might benefit from breaking up the text a bit more; for example by adding more H2 headings (this is good for search engine optimisation, particularly if you include some keywords eg 'project natal') 
   Yes might benefit from more content but short hubs can perform well as most of the ads appear 'above the fold' anyway (near the top)
   
   Excellent first Hub - well done!

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