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My first hub! is it okay?

  1. adzulynsky profile image58
    adzulynskyposted 5 years ago

    My first hub! is it okay?

    Hey guys i'm new here! I would like someone to give me afew tips here! tips on what to write maybe or how to make this interesting for me! I have alot of hobbies and enjoy writing alot!

    Published my first hub and would like to see if anyone can give me afew tips here and there. Thanks!

  2. Ms Dee profile image85
    Ms Deeposted 5 years ago

    Welcome to HubPages! Here are a few initial thoughts. Put your photo down near the second subject heading. That way, the AdSense ads will be at the top, above it so you might get more clicks on them. When editing the hub, look at the Preview to make sure you have enough text before the second subject heading to make this happen. Second, I like how you used the number bullets for ease of reading. Third, don't italicize all of the text like you have done after the video--just a few choice words. Third, nice that you included a poll. Fourth, the hub is too short. Add an explanation of what an Xbox is for older people like me and a bit of history--like when did they start coming onto the market. Five, the hub would be much more interesting if you added a picture of the cutting tool you refer to, another of the sand paper and indicate what grade of sandpaper, another of the glass you buy (to see what it looks like from the store), and pictures of items in 4-6, too. This would make it a real nice DIY hub. Hope this helps some!

    1. adzulynsky profile image58
      adzulynskyposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      THANK YOU SO MUCH! I will be working towards at it! smile Thanks again for the tips smile

    2. Ms Dee profile image85
      Ms Deeposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      YW! Hope it goes well for you.

  3. profile image0
    danielabramposted 5 years ago

    Your hub is good. I recommend advertising it on your social networks and adding a few more pics to spruce it up.

  4. WryLilt profile image91
    WryLiltposted 5 years ago

    There is a forum called The Extreme Hub Makeover forum especially designed for hub feedback. smile

  5. missa72542 profile image97
    missa72542posted 5 years ago

    I REALLY like it. Like the product itself, it looks really cool and I would be interested in doing it. But I'm going to write a response like a person who was looking on how to do it:

    "I like it, but I'm still confused because I found your page and still don't know HOW to do it. I have the required materials, thank you for that! However, it would have been nice to know how you did it... now I have to go to yet another website to find that out"

    Get what I mean? Great hub, so far, I really like it. But maybe you should add more detail on how you completed it. People want one website to answer all their questions at once.

    By far, I am not the best hubber. I'm still new, so take my advice however you wish. But that's just what I would think if I were someone looking for how to do this smile

    Also, welcome to hubpages!

    1. adzulynsky profile image58
      adzulynskyposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      hey thanks alot...i will be working towards it! smile thanks again!!

    2. missa72542 profile image97
      missa72542posted 5 years agoin reply to this

      No problem smile I wish you a lot of luck here! smile