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Am I On The Right Lines?

  1. britishbirdlover profile image59
    britishbirdloverposted 8 years ago


    Although I've been a member of Hubpages for only a year I've only got round to publishing my first hubs.


    It would be great to have some feedback on my first hub - ie is it interesting, would you read it, what could I add?

    Any feedback will be much appreciated.

    Thank you.

    1. AEvans profile image78
      AEvansposted 8 years agoin reply to this

      I read and commented! smile

      1. britishbirdlover profile image59
        britishbirdloverposted 8 years agoin reply to this

        Thanks - you comments were great. Really useful. I am definitely being inspired to make 2010 the year I crack Hubpages!

  2. fishtiger58 profile image78
    fishtiger58posted 8 years ago

    Your hub was great. Keep up the good work.

  3. habee profile image94
    habeeposted 8 years ago

    I read and added a suggestion. Good job!

  4. Shadesbreath profile image84
    Shadesbreathposted 8 years ago

    It's a very good hub, actually. I imagine it will do well for you.  I did struggle with one sentence, in the paragraph right before the first videom, the line: "Don't choose a bird table that has a bird box in the roof...

    I'm not sure what you are talking about.  You switched to "bird table" and I'm not sure why or how I choose a bird table, or what one is, and why it would be "in" the roof before I chose it, etc., or what the relationship is between the bird box, bird house and bird table is.

    Beyond that, good work.

  5. chinweike profile image69
    chinweikeposted 8 years ago

    I read and commented good work. I have never seen the beauty in keeping birds but your hub got me thinking