I'd like feedback on my article: The Subtlety of Quantum Mechanics

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    Dishant Varshneyposted 7 years ago

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    Nothing in this universe is perfect, and so is my article. I would appreciate any kind of feedback which helps me to improve my writing. So, please take out some time to read my simple but interesting article: The Subtlety of Quantum Mechanics >> https://owlcation.com/stem/The-Subtlety … -Mechanics

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      theraggededgeposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Your article is already on Owlcation, so posting it here is not such a good idea because it looks like promotion.

      However, I took a look and I would suggest you break some of those big blocks of text into smaller paragraphs.

      I have read and heard about the photon experiment so often that it is a little bit dull now. It's regularly taught to schoolchildren.

      "Behind this wall, there’s another wall, called screen, with a buzzer." Could you just say "Behind this wall is a screen with a buzzer."?

      The second image is sourced from Pinterest. It also has a watermark and source info on it. I'm surprised the editors let it through as images like this are discouraged.

      All your images should be legal to use;you can't just take them from other websites.

      https://hubpageshelp.com/content/Learni … -image-use

      And the Wiki one will require more detailed info.

      "You can use (free) images from Wikipedia on your own site, or anywhere you like. You can use images that are freely-licensed images, provided you comply with the individual image's license terms. While all article text is licensed under the GFDL, free images have several free content licenses to choose from."

      https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia … _Wikipedia

      https://hubpageshelp.com/content/Learni … -image-use

      Hope that helps

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