I am a newbie here and would be glad to receive feedback on my published article and suggestions to improve traffic.
Thanks in advance for your valuable time.
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Just a couple of quick points - 1)Consider revising your title to make more engaging 2)Edit your subheading to meet HP guidelines for example makes sure you are using the subtitle line in your capsules and capitalizing according to requirements 3)Proofread for mistakes e.g. A grand spectacle comprising of 10 rituals - should read comprised of 10 rituals. Also punctuation, missing words, capitalization, tense, grammar etc. 4) I'm not sure if some of the awkwardness is due to your attempting to add keywords but it seems like it could be e.g. an imaginary Iyer(subset of Tamil Brahmin) as well as the title 5) You tend to write with run on sentences e.g. Each and every ritual forms a unique, extravagant, splendid and a beautiful package which is worth taking a peek and this article unveils the 10 important customs that spans across the wedding, which I vouch, will definitely stand apart from the rituals of the other regional Indian weddings.
6) Watch your use of adjectives choose one good one instead of 4 or 5 as in the above example 7) Consider wording choice - some choices make your content unclear, others don't quite make sense and still others could be strengthened. For example, above Each and every ritual forms a unique, extravagant, splendid and a beautiful package - I'm not sure what it means that it forms a unique or beautiful etc. "package." 7)Get rid of excess wording - e.g. the example above could simply read: Each ritual is beautiful. This article unveils 10 important customs that differentiate an Iyer wedding from other regional Indian weddings.
Hope this helps. Good luck.
I thought the article was good for the most part. I just thought the first paragraph needed revision.
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