I'd like feedback on my article: Why is Lighting the Single Most Important...

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   despinadesignposted 6 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: Why is Lighting the Single Most Important Aspect of an Interior?

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      lobobrandonposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      I am not sure about the level of work to pass QAP, so I'm just going to guide you based on the requirements to get a hub to a niche site, the place you want to get it to in the end.
      
      1. Do not begin with a heading. Your title serves as the heading, so you may want to remove the statement "Let there be light"
      2. Your article is about interior lighting and not stage lighting, the intro is a nice analogy, but there is no real need of that image of a stage. It takes away from the topic.
      3. Use APA title styling for all your headings: https://capitalizemytitle.com/ for example, The Single Most Important Aspect of an Interior and not The single most important aspect of an interior
      4. Too much repetition under the topic The single most important aspect of an interior even though it's just 2 - 3 sentences.
      5. You can improve on the content and the way you present it. Don't just add images to a header, also write something about it, maybe?
      6. Adding an Amazon capsule without telling people exactly why you recommend it and/or how it helped you is just going to get the capsule snipped and maybe this is the biggest issue right now for you not passing QAP.
      
      There are other things that you could work on, check out some hubs on niche sites and also compare this one with your two featured articles and you'd spot some differences.
      
      Good luck.

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         despinadesignposted 6 years agoin reply to this

         Thank you for the comprehensive feedback. It is very helpful!

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   Rupert Taylorposted 6 years ago

   What Brandon said plus:
   
   The first two images look as though they've been grabbed from the Internet. You can't do that. Images have to be Creative Commons licensed.
   
   The other images appear to be your own but, when I click on source, I see they are from Despina Design, your own company. This could be seen as promotional by HP, and HP doesn't like self promotion.

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      despinadesignposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you for the feedback. It is greatly appreciated!

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