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   Francesca mcbarronposted 6 years ago

   I keep getting knocked back I am not sure what is wrong with my post?

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      CYong74posted 6 years agoin reply to this

      I don't see any article under your profile. However, your About section reads like an introduction to a specific group. HP probably treats that as self-promotional, which is something it doesn't allow.

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      Francesca mcbarronposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      https://hubpages.com/education/Holding- … the-Bllsht

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         Francesca mcbarronposted 6 years agoin reply to this

         This article is unpublished because it did not receive high enough ratings to meet HubPages' quality standards or because it contains spammy elements. It will remain unpublished until it is edited, published again, and rated high enough to be Featured. To see our rating criteria, please visit our official rating scale (we recommend shooting for criteria matching articles rated eight or above).

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            theraggededgeposted 6 years agoin reply to this

            Can't see the article, but going by the URL, it looks like the title contains profanities. And... you've put it into the Education category. No way will that be approved. Same with the content. See if you can write it without resorting to using such language. It should be suitable for children.

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               Francesca mcbarronposted 6 years agoin reply to this

               Damn it... it makes me sound better... i did actually for some reason its reverted okay i will keep on keeping on thank you

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      TIMETRAVELER2posted 6 years agoin reply to this

      Can't see the article, but from what others here have said it appears to me that you have not even bothered to read the information in the learning center that tells you what is required in order for an article to be featured.  Foul language is not acceptable, self promotion of any kind is not acceptable, having too many links is taboo...sounds like you've been doing all of these things.

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   Titiaposted 6 years ago

   If it is a hub you're talking about you should give us the link so we can take a look at it.

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   Francesca mcbarronposted 6 years ago

   https://hubpages.com/relationships/Step … take-on-it

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      theraggededgeposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      A different article, yes?
      
      Taking a quick look...
      
      Many grammatical errors throughout. It needs a thorough proof-read. For example, "I just do not understand why would they think that a movie that represents 1950 men and women based on the past?" That doesn't make sense. There's a clause missing.
      
      You need to know that this platform is a site for professional and near-professional amateur writers. Therefore, standards are high.
      
      Have you looked at the Learning Center yet? Click Help at the top right of any page to navigate there. It's really important to research the site and its requirements before launching into writing.
      
      The point of the Stepford Wives is that real women were being replaced by automatons or lobotomized versions. I haven't seen the remake but I remember the original. It wasn't about the fact that society only approved of Stepford-type women, but that the men who worked for a certain company were persuaded that that's what they needed. Sanitized perfection. So I sort of think you are missing the point. It wasn't that society expected women to be like that at all.
      
      In any case, the fact that 1950s women were largely stay-at-home mothers was exactly that, a fact. Men and women had more defined roles, back then. Many today might say that it was a good thing. Society was more settled. So you are saying that the fifties (as represented by the movie) were not so good, but at the same time, you are denouncing today's mixed up mess. Think about what you are trying to convey to your readers. It has to make sense.
      
      Research and refine. Don't just sit down and 'blog' it. You need to produce an informative and readable article.
      
      I'm sure you can do it. You have a nice sparky style, so good luck.

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