I'd like feedback on my article: Let the Pandemic Be Your Wake up Call Moment
Hi Susan, the people reading your post aren't editors or moderators, we are writers like you. We don't have the power to do anything regarding your articles - all we can do is review them and make suggestions.
Here are mine
You need to break the text up into several text capsules so you can add proper subtitles. Then you can also add at least one legal-to-use image.
There are many articles around that address the same thing. There have been several posted here for review in the last week. I think everyone is getting a bit bored with the topic now, tbh.
Additionally, you haven't helped anyone with this; it's essentially an advertisement for your services. You can't include your email address within the article as it will be seen as self-promotion. People are able to contact you via your profile, so that should be enough.
I would suggest that you include at least one practice that people can do at home, on their own. That would be the generous thing to do. Otherwise, your subtitle "Take Control of Your Spiritual Health" doesn't mean what it implies.
I'm sure you would have much more success if you posted this on your FaceBook page.
Good luck.
Edit: I notice from your profile that you only joined a day ago. It might be a good idea if you review the material in the Learning Center. Click Help, top right to navigate there.
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