I'd like feedback on my article:10 Principles Of Good Parenting

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  1. AnaidaSoni profile image41
    AnaidaSoniposted 3 years ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: https://hubpages.com/family/10-Principl … -Parenting

    1. Miebakagh57 profile image69
      Miebakagh57posted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Hi there, I got a 404 page not found report. Were you editing it? Post me laler, and thanks.

      1. AnaidaSoni profile image41
        AnaidaSoniposted 3 years agoin reply to this

        I will edit today sir and will share soon thank you so much for your response sir.

      2. AnaidaSoni profile image41
        AnaidaSoniposted 3 years agoin reply to this

        Here Link: https://hubpages.com/family/10-Principl … -Parenting

        I look forward for your advice.

    2. Miebakagh57 profile image69
      Miebakagh57posted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Hi there, thanks for re-publishing the article.       It contain good information. But here were few short comings. You have got to proof read it again because of sentence structure.         Your sub headings were all rightly in the APA style. But I advice that you remove all the Arabic numerals. This is because each subheading is not a paragraph, and do not even contain any sub items that require an asteric or numbering.      I think the "Buttom Line" is better replaced with the word. "Conclusion."   Lastly, remove all the reference at the body of the story. Place these behind the conclusion with a new capsule "References." Glad you did.

      1. AnaidaSoni profile image41
        AnaidaSoniposted 3 years agoin reply to this

        Thank you sir i have done the editing

    3. Miebakagh57 profile image69
      Miebakagh57posted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Hi, just gone thro the edit. The "Of" should be "of. Give pictures titles and descriptions.            The opening sentence is good. Remove the comma and add a fullstop. "And good parenting...work." So you have two separate short sentences or a single compound sentence join by the conjuction "and" with just only one fullstop.       "You have to be tender." not compassionate, a word used when adults suffer.  "So (I) have come with 10...for you. The steps can help you be the best parent you can be.           The word "Great" replace it with "Good" in the first subcapsule. The big A replace with small  a, and so on in all the other capsules unless it is at the beginning e. g. Be a Role Model or A Role Model, and so on throughout.                     Proof read and re-edit the article for such typos. Delete all descriptions under references. In case of source books, add titlle, author's names, and publishing company.

  2. theraggededge profile image96
    theraggededgeposted 3 years ago

    Page does not exist. Have you unpublished it?

    1. AnaidaSoni profile image41
      AnaidaSoniposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Yes I published it

  3. Drew Agravante profile image95
    Drew Agravanteposted 3 years ago

    Hi Anaida,

    The page is not found. It seemed like it wasn't published yet. Can you check your article again whether it was unpublished?

  4. theraggededge profile image96
    theraggededgeposted 3 years ago

    You can't post it here. You need to delete it.

    On the QAP reject notice there will be a link you can click on to get help.

    You really should delete it now or it will be flagged as duplicate content.

    1. AnaidaSoni profile image41
      AnaidaSoniposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you ma'am i have deleted it from here

    2. AnaidaSoni profile image41
      AnaidaSoniposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Hi Maam,

      I have done some editing on my article here is the link: https://hubpages.com/family/10-Principl … -Parenting

      I look forward to your suggestion.

  5. Drew Agravante profile image95
    Drew Agravanteposted 3 years ago

    Nice work, it actually already looks great.

    My tip for you to strengthen your article is to add established researches about it. E.g Have A Decent Conversation - is there any research that shows having a decent conversation improves child mental and emotional growth. Then add it.

    Aside from that, you could still improve your work by cleaning it further, making it more readable for a wider audience. I suggest using the app below.

    http://www.hemingwayapp.com/

    Since I can't see the images. Add at least 3 pics. Don't flood the work.

    Then, after that, do try publishing it again. ^^

    Have a nice day.

    1. AnaidaSoni profile image41
      AnaidaSoniposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Hi Drew,

      I have done editing and even proof of my statement.

      Here is the link: https://hubpages.com/family/10-Principl … -Parenting

      I look forward to your suggestion.

  6. AnaidaSoni profile image41
    AnaidaSoniposted 3 years ago

    Hi Drew,

    Thank you for your reply and I will rewrite it and publish it again

 
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