I need to submit an article to Owlcation but not sure if it is worthy enough to be accepted there
I Need feedback on my article, please, as its the first time that I am sending any article to a network site
a lot of my articles are on LetterPile but, I never submitted them
They were moved by HP
Thanks in advance
Here's the link
https://discover.hubpages.com/education … man-empire
I've already read and commented on this article, which I thoroughly enjoyed. The rather charming, 'theraggededge', is generally right, in my opinion. There are minor grammatical errors, which creeps into some of your other articles as well. You are intelligent enough to correct them.
Both Ann Carr and Linda Crampton are exceptionally good writers, yet I always feel that they keep re-reading their work. Spend more time on your articles, even if you write less.
Now your question should also be related to the criteria for publication in Owlcation, as HubPages would only put it there, if its fits their rules. Otherwise, it would naturally be moved to a 'niche' site soon, all being well. Salaam!
I respect your and Bev opinion
I edited the article to remove the grammatical errors
if any of you can check again after five minutes as it takes time to reflect
Vale, mi Dulce. Solamente por tu. Fine! My Sweet! Only for you.
Muchas gracias, manatita
bendiciones -- Thank you very much, manatita, blessings
I have started. Unfortunately your work requires a detailed read. It would be nice to pay attention to what I have corrected so far, as you tend to over use words sometimes. I have altered the heading slightly and shortened a couple of sentences. You lack 'flow.' The mistakes mentioned by Beverley are also still there.
I'm here again to say that I'm hungry, so I'll go and eat. This means that you run the risk of your work being moved into a niche site, after which you will only be able to edit from your account.
Send me your address. My way of helping people, is to take the whole thing and copy into Microsoft. I then read and highlight as is necessary. email@example.com
Done. Too big to post here. Send me an email. Cheers. - Manatita
I am so sorry, Manatita
I was away
was not on HP
but I send it to you now
sorry for the inconvenience
and Thanks a lot for being so kind and nice
God Bless You, My spiritual Brother
Manatita, Check in spam/Junk, please
I sent you an email a few days ago as well
It also might be lying there
@Manatita, I send it again
Hope you will find it now
Thank you so much Manatita
You helped me a lot
I appreciate your efforts and kindness
God Bless you always
A joy to work with you. Allah has given you a Heart of beauty and simplicity. Stay well and blessed. Salaam!
I'd say remove the first word, 'European'. You don't need it twice. Also, that's a claim that might need to be backed up with evidence. How do you know that study/teaching of the Ottoman Empire is ignored?
"However, the Ottoman Empire was a huge empire in which Europe had been in conflict..."
Should be 'with which', or 'against which'. Remove 'However'.
I can't go through it all, but there are a great number of minor grammatical errors. For instance, you have used 'wanted' when you probably mean 'waned'.
It needs a detailed proofreading before you can submit it.
I would be deleting those personal contact details. HubPages is not a closed forum - anyone can access it.
I think, the forums should remain closed to the outsiders
That’s just my opinion
@Manatita see what I found on google
A poem you dedicated to me
I am glad it came upon searching my HP profile on google
Yours is called Spirituality Made Simple. You have commented on it. This one is for Brenda Arledge, I believe.
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