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  1. Misbah786 profile image86
    Misbah786posted 14 months ago

    I need to submit an article to Owlcation but not sure if it is worthy enough to be accepted there
    I Need feedback on my article, please, as its the first time that I am sending any article to a network site
    a lot of my articles are on LetterPile but, I never submitted them
    They were moved by HP
    Thanks in advance
    Blessings

    Here's the link
    https://discover.hubpages.com/education … man-empire

    1. manatita44 profile image83
      manatita44posted 14 months agoin reply to this

      Assalamu Alaikum!

      I've already read and commented on this article, which I thoroughly enjoyed. The rather charming, 'theraggededge', is generally right, in my opinion. There are minor grammatical errors, which creeps into some of your other articles as well. You are intelligent enough to correct them.

      Both Ann Carr and Linda Crampton are exceptionally good writers, yet I always feel that they keep re-reading their work. Spend more time on your articles, even if you write less.

      Now your question should also be related to the criteria for publication in Owlcation, as HubPages would only put it there, if its fits their rules. Otherwise, it would naturally be moved to a 'niche' site soon, all being well. Salaam!

      1. Misbah786 profile image86
        Misbah786posted 14 months agoin reply to this

        Wasalam, Manatita
        I respect your and Bev opinion
        I edited the article to remove the grammatical errors
        if any of you can check again after five minutes as it takes time to reflect

        1. manatita44 profile image83
          manatita44posted 14 months agoin reply to this

          Vale, mi Dulce. Solamente por tu. Fine! My Sweet! Only for you.

          1. Misbah786 profile image86
            Misbah786posted 14 months agoin reply to this

            Muchas gracias, manatita
            bendiciones -- Thank you very much, manatita, blessings

            1. manatita44 profile image83
              manatita44posted 14 months agoin reply to this

              I have started. Unfortunately your work requires a detailed read. It would be nice to pay attention to what I have corrected so far, as you tend to over use words sometimes. I have altered the heading slightly and shortened a couple of sentences. You lack 'flow.' The mistakes mentioned by Beverley are also still there.

              I'm here again to say that I'm hungry, so I'll go and eat. This means that you run the risk of your work being moved into a niche site, after which you will only be able to edit from your account.

              Send me your address. My way of helping people, is to take the whole thing and copy into Microsoft. I then read and highlight as is necessary. ceeccil@hotmail.com

            2. manatita44 profile image83
              manatita44posted 14 months agoin reply to this

              Done. Too big to post here. Send me an email. Cheers. - Manatita

              1. Misbah786 profile image86
                Misbah786posted 14 months agoin reply to this

                I am so sorry, Manatita
                I was away
                was not on HP
                but I send it to you now
                sorry for the inconvenience
                and Thanks a lot for being so kind and nice
                God Bless You, My spiritual Brother

                1. manatita44 profile image83
                  manatita44posted 14 months agoin reply to this

                  Deleted

                  1. Misbah786 profile image86
                    Misbah786posted 14 months agoin reply to this

                    Manatita, Check in spam/Junk, please
                    I sent you an email a few days ago as well
                    It also might be lying there
                    blessings


                    https://hubstatic.com/15446795_f1024.jpg

                  2. Misbah786 profile image86
                    Misbah786posted 14 months agoin reply to this

                    @Manatita, I send it again
                    Hope you will find it now

              2. Misbah786 profile image86
                Misbah786posted 14 months agoin reply to this

                Thank you so much Manatita
                You helped me a lot
                I appreciate your efforts and kindness
                God Bless you always

                1. manatita44 profile image83
                  manatita44posted 14 months agoin reply to this

                  A joy to work with you. Allah has given you a Heart of beauty and simplicity. Stay well and blessed.  Salaam!

                  1. Misbah786 profile image86
                    Misbah786posted 14 months agoin reply to this

                    Thank you so much Manatita
                    I am blessed to have you, my friend
                    You are a beautiful soul
                    God bless you
                    I am thankful to you

  2. theraggededge profile image98
    theraggededgeposted 14 months ago

    I'd say remove the first word, 'European'. You don't need it twice. Also, that's a claim that might need to be backed up with evidence. How do you know that study/teaching of the Ottoman Empire is ignored?

    "However, the Ottoman Empire was a huge empire in which Europe had been in conflict..."

    Should be 'with which', or 'against which'. Remove 'However'.

    I can't go through it all, but there are a great number of minor grammatical errors. For instance, you have used 'wanted' when you probably mean 'waned'.

    It needs a detailed proofreading before you can submit it.

    1. Misbah786 profile image86
      Misbah786posted 14 months agoin reply to this

      Oh Thanks BevG

      1. manatita44 profile image83
        manatita44posted 14 months agoin reply to this

        Thanks Beverley. Done, I believe. Stay well and blessed. - Manatita

  3. theraggededge profile image98
    theraggededgeposted 14 months ago

    I would be deleting those personal contact details. HubPages is not a closed forum - anyone can access it.


    https://hubstatic.com/15446922_f1024.jpg

    1. Misbah786 profile image86
      Misbah786posted 14 months agoin reply to this

      I think, the forums should remain closed to the outsiders
      That’s just my opinion smile

    2. Misbah786 profile image86
      Misbah786posted 14 months agoin reply to this

      @Manatita see what I found on google
      A poem you dedicated to me
      I am glad it came upon searching my HP profile on google




      https://hubstatic.com/15446988_f1024.jpg

      1. manatita44 profile image83
        manatita44posted 14 months agoin reply to this

        Yours is called Spirituality Made Simple. You have commented on it. This one is for Brenda Arledge, I believe.

        1. Misbah786 profile image86
          Misbah786posted 14 months agoin reply to this

          Yes you are right Manatita

          1. manatita44 profile image83
            manatita44posted 14 months agoin reply to this

            Ok. I'll send you a poem today

            1. Misbah786 profile image86
              Misbah786posted 14 months agoin reply to this

              Thanks a lot for the poem, Manatita
              I have sent you an email now
              I hope you received it
              Blessings

 
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