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   GhulamNabiMemonposted 2 years ago

   Hello All,
           I have been writing on this platform for the last two years. I have written articles on different topics. You can visit and see my articles, the thing which discourages that is views and readers, help me, seat members as my hard work can motivate me for more productive in my writings.
   I appeal to all the members to read my writings and help me to promote my writings.
   Regards

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      Misbah786posted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Hi Ghulam Nabi
      
      I randomly looked at a couple of your articles. Here's what I found:
      
      1) You are not providing source links (I have checked 8 random articles and none of them had resource links except for the one that is on Owlcation)
      
      2) The headings on your photographs are illogical (Most of the headers are unrelated to what the article is about)
      
      3) I recall advising you once not to use random Amazon or affiliate links on your articles; I didn't notice any in the articles I looked at, but I'm not sure if you still have them, and to be honest, I have no idea how HP was moving them to Discover.
      
      4) I've noticed that you're using the wrong disclaimers.
      
      5) Your bio does not match the topics you are writing about.
      
      6) I’ve discovered that the majority of your articles are opinionated, and HP is looking for evergreen content
      
      7) In your article, 'The Secrets of the Universe: How Physics and Cosmology Explain Everything,' you have included an Amazon link for a Cosmology Book. I can’t see any resource links at the end of your article, nor have you mentioned the book anywhere in your article, so why are you recommending it to others? How can a title like 'Woman Standing in Front of Black Board' fit in this article?
      
      8) Have you ever submitted an article to HP’s network sites?
      
      I guess there must be some more errors; these are only a handful that I discovered randomly looking at your articles. I'm hoping someone will respond to your thread and help you more.
      
      Best wishes!

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         GhulamNabiMemonposted 2 years agoin reply to this

         Thanks for your suggestions

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      Mike Grindleposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      To follow up on what Misbah has said, it seems like you keep using headings instead of captions. For example, in your article about Bitcoin, you wrote: "Woman Wearing White Shirt Holding Bitcoin" as a header where it should be a caption (i.e. underneath the picture and much smaller - you can do this when you upload a picture under the section titled "caption").

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   GhulamNabiMemonposted 2 years ago

   Thanks for the suggestion

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   Rupert Taylorposted 2 years ago

   Only one of your articles has been promoted to a niche site, which is where views and revenue come from. So, in the opinion of the editors, your articles are not meeting the high standard needed.
   
   The observations of Misbah and Mike are the same as my own. Check out the formatting instructions in the Learning Center, follow the link at "Help" top right of this page.
   
   HubPages is not keen on opinion writing; it wants fact-based information supported by credible sources.

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      greenmindposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Adding to this point – since you do have an article that has been accepted to a niche site, consider using it as a model for improving your other articles. If you did it once, you can do it again!

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   AliciaCposted 2 years ago

   Hi, Ghulam. I agree with what other people have said. I have another suggestion that should help you get more readers once your articles are switched to niche sites. I read your “Secrets of the Universe” article. The language and grammar in the article are very good.  My suggestion is that you edit the language in the writer description on your profile. If you correct the errors, it will match the grammar in your articles and may increase the views on your articles.

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   MariaMontgomeryposted 2 years ago

   I offer this critique as my alter ego, The Grumpy Book Reviewer, providing constructive criticism. I hope you will accept it in the spirit in which it is offered.
   
   Before you post a request for help, be sure to proofread it first. This one includes a passage that is confusing:  “…the thing which discourages that is views and readers, help me, seat members…”  Seat members?  Maybe it’s a typo? If so, delete the comma after “readers” and after “help me”.
   
   I read your article entitled, “Is Feminism the Only Matter of Third-World Countries?” The title implies or suggests that third world countries have no problems other than feminism. I suspect that was not your intent. You may need to re-word the title to, “Is Women’s Rights a Problem Only in Third World Countries?” (Third World does not need to be hyphenated.)
   
   The intro photo is labeled to tell us there are women sitting on a brown bench — really? Anyone can see that. Instead, consider removing the label, and using a caption that says something like, “Women of all nationalities experience discrimination”.  In fact, remove the titles from all your photos. If you can’t think of an interesting caption, don’t put one, especially not one that states the obvious.
   
   In the section titled, “How are Women Treated in Developed Countries?” you have started a sentence with a conjunction:  “…But that is not entirely true. In developed countries like Australia…” Consider changing it to read, “…That is not entirely true, for example, in developed countries like Australia…”
   
   In the Callout, remove the title, because it is repeated in the callout itself:  “Feminism means not female superiority but it is about equality in society.” I suggest to re-wording it to sound less old-world formal – think Downton Abbey – to say, “Feminism does not mean superiority, but equality.”
   
   At this point I stopped reading.

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      GhulamNabiMemonposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      I accept constructive criticism and thanks

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