My article is rejected, point out my mistakes plz.

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   sobia amirposted 2 years ago

   https://discover.hubpages.com/travel/Vi … K-Pakistan
   Here is the link.i want to know about the mistake i am making in writing this article.

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      theraggededgeposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Hi Sobia,
      
      My suggestions:
      
      If you are using your own photos, add the words 'Photo author's own' to the captions in the image capsule. Don't put subtitles above the images, leave the box empty.
      
      Check your spelling. It's 'meadows', not 'medows', unless that is the correct local spelling, but I see you used both versions. Also, is it Siri Pay or Siri Paye?
      
      Don't put periods/full stops after subtitles. Make sure capitalisation is consistent throughout... should be Naran City, not city.
      
      These are minor errors; the rest of the article looks pretty good.
      
      Hope that helps.

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         sobia amirposted 2 years agoin reply to this

         Thank u so much.

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      chef-de-jourposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Keep writing and learning and studying. So important. Read material by veteran authors on HP to glean ideas and inspiration, then write your own original articles.
      
      Travel articles need to have a mix of personal experience and practical insight, so you might add:
      
      * places to stay overnight such as hotels/motels/BnB and so on.
      * cultural highlights, traditions etc etc
      * special things to do.
      * food, eating out, restaurants, street food.
      * mountain names, myths, local stores and legends.
      * comparisons between towns, areas, people.
      
      It all depends on what you want from your article and what you're offering the reader. Are you content with a short description of a short trip to the Naran Kaghan, or would you want to expand a little and offer potential visitors from abroad further depthful information?
      
      Study other travel articles and learn from them, then you'll have a better idea of what to aim for.
      
      Take it step by step for best results. Persevere.

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   ravirajan01posted 2 years ago

   Hi Sobia, as Andrew mentioned, travel articles need to mix personal travel experiences and a bit of history. A broad format can be :
   
   1. Start with why you chose that place to travel.
   2, A bit of history of that place.
   3. Your travel experiences - places, people, food, culture, etc.
   4. Travel details - how to reach there,  particular seasons, do's and don'ts, cultural constraints, etc.
   
   I am sure you will do well—best of luck.

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