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   Phantom21posted 2 years ago

   Please can anyone let me know what errors I made in this article. The name of the article is What VR Headset is The Best.

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      eugbugposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      "Which" and "what" can be interchangeable when asking questions, but "which" is used when there a limited number of choices to choose from. So you could change that in your title. However maybe using "what" would give more views, I'm not sure. Don't forget to add a question mark at the end of your title.
      You need to attribute the photos. Did you just lift them from websites? You could email the manufacturers and ask them is it OK to use photos. Often they can be obliging and have other, high resolution images that they provide to the press and reviewers. Don't contact them on social media, because often they only use these accounts for broadcasting information about their products and either won't reply or will give you a contact email address.
      I would have liked a comparison table at the end of the article that compared specs for the four products.

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         Phantom21posted 2 years agoin reply to this

         I don't know how to use table

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            eugbugposted 2 years agoin reply to this

            This shows you how:
            
            https://hubpageshelp.com/content/Learni … ng-hubtool

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      theraggededgeposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Again, it is a thin rewrite of similar articles. Are you using AI?
      
      You haven't attributed the images. Are they legal to use?
      
      Have you used and tested these headsets? Readers want a practical assessment, not rewrites of other people's content.

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         Phantom21posted 2 years agoin reply to this

         Nope I am not

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      OldRosesposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Before you ask busy people to review your article, you should spend some time reading the information in the Learning Center.  Click "Help" in the upper right corner of your screen.  The Learning Center tells you everything you need to know to write successfully on HubPages.

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   theraggededgeposted 2 years ago

   By the way, I spotted your 10 actors who died on set article. In some cases, you refer to them in the present tense and the photo of Ray Kinnear is not him. Looks like his son, Rory, who is still alive.
   
   Again, you haven't attributed the photos and made sure they have an appropriate licence.

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      Phantom21posted 2 years agoin reply to this

      I Changed that now thanks review more please

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         theraggededgeposted 2 years agoin reply to this

         You haven't fixed any of it.
         
         No, I'm not reading any more. People are getting annoyed that you are constantly asking for feedback and advice but you aren't editing your articles
         
         It's as if you are just trawling for views.

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   Phantom21posted 2 years ago

   Could someone review my article talking about the world ugliest sea creature

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      AliciaCposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      You have shared deep-sea photos and art without giving any credit to the photographer or the artist or showing that the images have a suitable license for use on HubPages. In addition, you need authoritative references for the facts in your article.

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   theraggededgeposted 2 years ago

   We've given you advice. Now apply it to all your articles before asking for more views.

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      PaulGoodman67posted 2 years agoin reply to this

      I agree.
      
      It's difficult to understand what's going on when people keep asking for feedback in the forums but then take no action, especially when there are blatant infringements like unlawful image use going on.
      
      They don't seem to really want advice. Maybe some people just want us to recommend a piece of software that will sort out all their problems for them without any effort?

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   dylananthony4uposted 2 years ago

   You can make your article more media-rich by adding a video or two. Also attribute your images like @theraggededge suggests. It's optional but you can also add captions to image to improve SEO.

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