My hub... part 2

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  1. awmoney profile image60
    awmoneyposted 8 years ago

    the previous topic got a bit big and annoying... I tried to write better English... can you guys please spot if it still looks like an article written by a 10 year old?

    http://hubpages.com/hub/the-hosting-affiliate-project

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      welcome_my_lifeposted 8 years agoin reply to this

      I'm glad to see there are people here to make us look smart.

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    Website Examinerposted 8 years ago

    It looks to me like an article written by an adult, however you need to do another round of proofreading, line by line and slowly. Also, you will need to learn to set commas at the right spot in the early parts of your sentences, these are very important in the English language. Other than that, you're doing fine.

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    1. awmoney profile image60
      awmoneyposted 8 years agoin reply to this

      can you point out where I am still making errors? thanks

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        Pani Midnyte Odinposted 8 years agoin reply to this

        awmoney, I am working on a revision of your hub. I'm going to send the revision to your email via HubPages though smile

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    Pani Midnyte Odinposted 8 years ago

    I just finished revising your hub and have sent my editing to your email via HubPages. I hope it helps and feel free to ask me any other questions you may have about spelling or grammar. smile

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    1. drej2522 profile image82
      drej2522posted 8 years agoin reply to this

      Wow, that was a really nice gesture Pani. Awesome!

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