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My second Hub!!! :) Check It Out

  1. frogdropping profile image82
    frogdroppingposted 8 years ago

    Hey and welcome to HubPages smile

    Your hub - are you meaning to write commercially and/or to be 'found' by search engines?

    If so - it's too short. You need to give more to the reader - a minimum of 500 words but aim higher, 800 or more. Make use of headers - H2, H3 etc. Hubpages provides you with the tools in the text capsules. Check them out, explore and use them.

    Your keywords/tags - too general. Tighten them up. Use Googles keyword tool, it's free.

    Insert media, by way of breaking up the text. Encourage your reader to stay on page (just a little longer), rather than making a hasty exit.

    Search and read the following hubbers - Mark Knowles, relache, Darkside, Sunforged, ryankett, Lissie. learn from them and you'll be good to go smile

  2. profile image44
    CouponCodes4uposted 8 years ago

    ok thanks alot for the resources and help. smile

  3. frogdropping profile image82
    frogdroppingposted 8 years ago

    You're welcome. And I hope I haven't made you feel rubbish. You asked. And as one of our lovely hubbers Pearldiver calls this forum - Extreme Rakeover or some such.

    It can get kinda stingy but it's constructive, not mean in any way smile

    1. profile image44
      CouponCodes4uposted 8 years agoin reply to this

      Hey don't worry i knew it wasn't great that's why i need the help.

      1. tobey100 profile image60
        tobey100posted 8 years agoin reply to this

        CC4u, practice makes perfect.  Just keep going.  You'll get better.  Also, checkout some of the other excellent hubs.

        1. profile image44
          CouponCodes4uposted 8 years agoin reply to this

          thanks for the encouragement i appreciate it. Makes me motivated for my next hub. big_smile

          1. tobey100 profile image60
            tobey100posted 8 years agoin reply to this

            Great, looking for it!

            1. profile image44
              CouponCodes4uposted 8 years agoin reply to this

              Thanks a lot tobey100

              1. tobey100 profile image60
                tobey100posted 8 years agoin reply to this

                Hey, at one time we were all newbies.  Gotta hang with the herd. smile

 
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