my other forum post was "whats up" but I meant give me some critism!

  1. gotchanose profile image31
    gotchanoseposted 7 years ago
    1. waterbottle profile image56
      waterbottleposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      so you would like to eat someone?

      i will say.. first try it and then what do you think after...

      1. Cagsil profile image60
        Cagsilposted 7 years agoin reply to this

        And you should open your mouth in this forum thread unless you intend on helping out. If you have nothing to offer as help, then please do not post to this forum thread.

        As far as the hub is concerned, I see no ads on your hub. Is it not a commercial hub? I only ask, because at the top of your hub there are no ads. Also, further down under the first picture of that guy, there is a blank white space below it?

        The words of the text capsule would wrap around any picture, as they were meant to, but yours do not wrap around the picture, so I am not sure what's up with that space.

        Otherwise, it seems like it is good to go.