not only am i new to the hub pages but i also am new to writing. i would like some advise on how to better myself and the things i write about. please help me out
Very insightful and your daughters opinion is great.
I would recommend breaking the wedding story into more text capsules it is a little difficult to read but has the makings of an interesting story,
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The HUb " Animal Abuse and Neglect" is a good hub, the pics tell a story, but the article itself needs to have more information, when I was reading it the words caught my attention but t still felt like there was something missing. Research your information more, provide links and back link to hubbers who have also written about this type of abuse.
Nice advice AEvans - I totally agree and also the first sentences of any writing should be strong enough to catch the attention of the reader , keeping him/her reading all the way through is important also , but if attention isn't caught in the first few sentences - there is less of a chance any of the writing will be read - well , thats my two cents worth of advice anyway
I think your writing is good, and the animal abuse story was capivating. My only suggestion would be to watch your spelling and punctuation.
I read all three hubs.
Spelling and grammar are important and you need to edit as soon as you find errors. I was only able to find a couple so your editing is pretty good.
The wedding hub is too much text all together, it should be broken up a little. Use more photos. Not believable.
The other two hubs, although current and reflecting 'hot topics' are a little too histrionic and lack sufficient text.
Generally, I would say you are off to a good start.
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by bipolar girl8 years ago
Hey folks im looking for some advice on my hub pages its taking forever to gather some fans so plz have a look and let me know what you think. Thanks.
by hinckles koma8 years ago
do you talk to dogs like that http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4u042vrv … re=channel
by Rahul Parashar4 years ago
Hello fellow Hubbers,Firstly, I would like to know if it is okay to ask for some help regarding improvements in a Hub? I don't know if it is allowed to ask for feedback here, but then again, where else will I go for it...
by viewfinders5 years ago
You can write a meaningful sentence with all 26 English alphabets in it.I have one for you all"PACK MY BOX WITH FIVE DOZEN LIQUOR JUGS" which has all 26 alphabets in it.try it................
by PiaC6 years ago
Which Hubs do you consider to be the most interesting? What was it that made them so interesting to you - the writing, the topic, the photos, or the layout?
by Barry Rutherford5 years ago
I know you're trying to prove a point, but actually this hub needs a LOT of work.1. Grammar: its vs it's . ex: " Its coming up to forty years since I last lived with one of my parents."2. Intro paragraph next...
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