I would really appreciate it if experienced hubbers could take a look at my hub and help me improve it if needed, which I'm sure it will be in need of some improvment.
Overall, not too bad. There are some grammatical issues, words that need to be changed so the language flows better. Maybe do a little more research as to why those treatments work for acne, or drawbacks to using those or other treatments.
Your hub doesn't look bad at all. I would put the news feeds after the comment box, at least after your last text capsule....you don't want your readers to click away before they have a chance to read all you have to say.
I like how you tell what the benefits are of each treatment at the end of each capsule. The lemon juice one needs to be a little clearer.
You have a couple of typos, it is always good to fix those.
If you have an Amazon affiliate, this would be a good hub to put some product links in.
Welcome to hubpages, keep working, I think that you are on the right track.
Hello Anna and Stevo,
Thanks for the advice on improving my hub I'll get straight onto it, really appreciate this. If you need any help or anything from me just ask.
by TheJman 8 years ago
Hey Guys and Girls!So, I've just started, I am very excisted about hubpages! I have published 4 hubs so far. Obviousy my traffic is low, I know that this is not a quick way to get cash but it takes time and patients. I would really appreciate it if any of you guys could give me some constructive...
by Ayesha Saini 4 years ago
What do you say when you appreciate someone or something??We often hear that a positive attitude makes a difference.When a person is grateful, they make the choice to see the positive in a situation. How do your words when you need to be grateful ???
by Lisa Stover 5 years ago
I spent a ton of time researching this hub and I'm very proud of it. I constantly use it myself as a reference, instead of searching online, so I know it's very useful. But, it doesn't get any traffic. Would anyone be willing to check it out and please give me suggestions on what...
by imadork 9 years ago
Hello everyone. Could all of you please read all of my hubs and tell me if you like them or not? Then, could you share my hubs with everybody you know? Maybe you could just do a mass email of all your contacts. Then, could you ask all of your contacts to do the same? I would...
by Kim Harris 8 years ago
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by Aiden Roberts 8 years ago
Hi Everyone,I have just published my latest puppy training hub and I am wondering should I use a video? I haven't used videos before as I am not sure of the rules for example with YouTube?If you don't mind and have some time take a look and see if you think a video would be useful, any comments...
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