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I just wrote my first Hub today

  1. Angel Scent profile image63
    Angel Scentposted 7 years ago

    Actually It's after 12 where I am, so I wrote it yesterday. I'm very excited so I'm up late and just completed my 2nd Hub. Please take a look at them and let me know what I should do to improve. I think the first one needs more than one photo. The topic of the first Hub is a downer (domestic violence), but it needed to be written. My second Hub is much lighter and can benefit all people. I'm happy to be here and hope to be a boon to the site. It seems like a fabulous community of writers!

    1. Literature Fairy profile image79
      Literature Fairyposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      I read your first hub, It's amazing, and so powerful and inspirational! I love the way you wrote with such hard hitting honesty. Really well done! I know you asked for constructive criticism, but honestly I wouldn't change a thing, I think you have a gear writing style and your story and message is a very important one that will hopefully give strength to others in similar situations! Well done! LF x

      1. Literature Fairy profile image79
        Literature Fairyposted 7 years agoin reply to this

        that is a typo, its meant to say GREAT writing style. lol. smile

    2. eaglecreek profile image61
      eaglecreekposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      congratulations on your first hub . i also am working on my first hub and i will be so happy when i get it completed. i look forward to reading you hubs

    3. saleheensblog profile image59
      saleheensblogposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      welcome to HP and congrats on your kick off. smile

      You can post your hublinks here for critiques without any hesitation this is what this forum is for.

    4. nikmaya62 profile image46
      nikmaya62posted 7 years agoin reply to this

      I read your hubs,  nice hubs. I think you are a good writer for the next. Keep it up. I am waiting for your next hubs.

  2. Joy56 profile image59
    Joy56posted 7 years ago

    well done you and a warm welcome to the mad house.

  3. nasus loops profile image79
    nasus loopsposted 7 years ago

    Congratulations on the first hub.  I have just read it and must say very well written.  I would not change anything if I was you.

    Oh by the way I am sure you will have fun here.

  4. richtwf profile image61
    richtwfposted 7 years ago

    Congrats on taking that first step on an exciting hubventure!

    1. Angel Scent profile image63
      Angel Scentposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Thanks so much everyone. Your comments mean a lot to me.

      Tina

  5. saleheensblog profile image59
    saleheensblogposted 7 years ago
  6. wilderness profile image94
    wildernessposted 7 years ago

    On the ACV hub:

    Make sure each text capsule has a title, using some form of your keywords.  Not only are the keywords bolded that way, google looks at the titles.

    The large centered pics are a distraction.  Better to keep them smaller, and probably flushed right.

    I can't imagine what it would be, but perhaps a video of some sort.  Maybe a news capsule about ACV?  Something to keep the reader occupied on the hub for more time.

    I realize it's premature right now, but as you get more hubs, you will want to link them together, probably with both text and RSS links.  Just make sure that any text links, in particular, are relevant to each other.

    On the humor side, the first thing I saw was the now familiar huge, moving adsense ad for a tiny belly!  At least it was appropriate.

 
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