Feedback and Suggestions Please :)
It is an interesting hub, but I would suggest a few changes.
Add some images. You are describing a system that requires visualization so you could really go to town with those. This would mean breaking the text into smaller capsules but worth the effort I think.
It is not a great idea to hide amazon affiliate links in the text. One - the hubpages amazon capsules are visually appealing, and can be used quite well within the text. For example:
Apple iPhone bluetooth headsets
Two - it cuts hubpages out of the revenue which is unfair I think.
Apart from that, I think it is a good first hub.
Welcome
Mark, thanks for the advice. I'll start making some changes. One more question though; where would I get these images for my hub? I'm no artist, but do you think it'd be worthwhile to try drawing these images? Again thanks for the helpful feedback
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