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Some constructive critism please?

  1. Bev004 profile image60
    Bev004posted 6 years ago

    Hi,

    I'm very new to this and I have just written my first hub. I would really like some feedback on it if anyone would be so kind to have a glance over.

    Thank you smile


    http://hubpages.com/hub/Lady-Ga-Ga-facts

  2. CASE1WORKER profile image77
    CASE1WORKERposted 6 years ago

    dont know what you did but it is no longer published!

    1. Bev004 profile image60
      Bev004posted 6 years ago in reply to this

      Sorry didnt know what I had to do. Published now. smile

  3. psycheskinner profile image80
    psycheskinnerposted 6 years ago

    It is a popular topic and you have a good amount of text, however in my opinion it does really say very much.  The point of the piece could be clearer.

 
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