Want constructive criticism of a specific hub or set of hubs?

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   LegendaryN8posted 13 years ago

   
   
   I put this in the "answers" section and it actually should've been posted here.
   
   Many of us may be not performing to our fullest potential because we haven't taken a critical eye to each others' content.  I would like to offer you some constructive criticism.  If you have a hub or set of hubs that you would like to receive critical feedback for, drop the hub link here, and I will leave critical feedback on your hub.  Keep in mind this feedback may not always be *positive*, but it will definitely provoke some thought.
   
   If you do not want to publicly declare that you want critical feedback (but still would like to receive feedback), you can send me an email, and I will leave you some critical commentary on your hub.

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      Zenofsongposted 13 years agoin reply to this

      http://zenofsong.hubpages.com/hub/Turni … on-and-EFT
      
      Please tear apart this hub to the best of your ability.

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         LegendaryN8posted 13 years agoin reply to this

         Did you take it down?  I can not view it.

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            Zenofsongposted 13 years agoin reply to this

            Sorry, you can find this topic here: http://zenofsong.hubpages.com/hub/How-T … h-Hypnosis

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               LegendaryN8posted 13 years agoin reply to this

               Got it!  Sorry for delay, I will get everyone a response this weekend.  It's been a crazy week!

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               LegendaryN8posted 13 years agoin reply to this

               Zen, you have a comment posted to the link you gave me.

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      Perry Fenderposted 13 years agoin reply to this

      I have a tendency to develop "verbal diarrhea" and beat a dead horse until it's hamburger -- my first "published" hub that I wrote strictly for HP: http://perryfender.hubpages.com/hub/Rea … d-Property
      
      I'm terribly curious if there is a way to "cherry pick" advertisements on HP - I wrote a hub on the dangers of revolving credit card debt and Google's AdSense linked advertisements for credit cards -- seems like after reading a hub on the dangers of revolving debt, the last thing a reader would do is click such an advertisement.  I do not mind writing "public service announcements" -- but it would be nice to choose advertisements that readers are likely to click to see exactly how sustainable it would be to write on HP.

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         LegendaryN8posted 13 years agoin reply to this

         Perry, you have a comment posted to the link you gave me.

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         LegendaryN8posted 13 years agoin reply to this

         I left a comment for you on the link you gave me here.

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            Perry Fenderposted 13 years agoin reply to this

            Thank you -- I'll try to pair it down or at least "break it up" into more digestable segments.  I appreciate the feedback!

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      msivakumarposted 13 years agoin reply to this

      Hi,
      
      Please review http://msivakumar.hubpages.com
      
      I've been about one month here and I have a set of 13 hubs. Please review at your convenience and let me know the feedback (and constructive criticism) as well !!.
      
      Thanks in advance.
      
      Regards,
      Sivakumar

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         LegendaryN8posted 13 years agoin reply to this

         I went over your cricket hub - I really hope you expand on this because I know absolutely nothing about cricket!

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            msivakumarposted 13 years agoin reply to this

            Sure. Will try to do it Legend !!
            
            Peep in when you have time and give your feedback !
            
            Thanks.

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      NMLadyposted 13 years agoin reply to this

      Hi, 
      
      I want to make money w/hubs.  I have http://nmlady.hubpages.com/  and also a hub for my students BusinessOpsMngmnt.
      
      I would appreciate constructive critcism.
      
      Thanks,
      NMLady

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         LegendaryN8posted 13 years agoin reply to this

         I wrote a comment in your El Morrow National Park Hub.  Since you have over 40 hubs, it is difficult to just go over one and take a fine tooth comb over it.  I saw that you have an interest in cooking though.  If you could, could you please put in a particular hub that you would like me to look at?

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   Escobanaposted 13 years ago

   I'm always in for some extra criticism! I have only four Hubs, all about the same topic. Shoot and let me know where I can improve a part from adding adds of Amazone.
   
   I'm a fan of you:-) The Hub "How many waiters can you meet in one day?" had to be taken down. The one you commented on. It wasn't original content but totally different than the rest. A light topic it was.
   
   I'd like to know if my Hubs, inform you in a different way about Bipolar Disorder than the other Hubs there are about this topic? I try to be as original as possible.
   
   Furthermore I'd like some criticism on my grammar and writing style.
   
   I'll be looking forward to your comments:-)

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      LegendaryN8posted 13 years agoin reply to this

      I will take a good look at what you have up so far on the order of hubs and provide some effective criticism this weekend! = D

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         Escobanaposted 13 years agoin reply to this

         Great! Take your time anyway....I'm not in a hurry:-)

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            LegendaryN8posted 13 years agoin reply to this

            LOL I wrote a comment on your "Sweetheart? What about a bigger boobs?" hub.

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               Escobanaposted 13 years agoin reply to this

               Thanks! I made a change considering your comment and will respond in my Hub to the rest later. LOL I'm glad you liked it.

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   Uninvited Writerposted 13 years ago

   This entire forum is for constructive criticism, no need for a separate thread.

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      Perry Fenderposted 13 years agoin reply to this

      Ouch!

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      LegendaryN8posted 13 years agoin reply to this

      Ever notice how someone will put a post for criticism and it will go unread?  That's why I made a *thread* about it.
      
      Just because someone posts their hub in extreme hub makeover, does not mean they are looking for *constructive criticism*.  They may want comments, but not everyone can handle *constructive criticism*.

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         Escobanaposted 13 years agoin reply to this

         True! By reading this post and the offer to help out, it was brought to my attention in a more effective way. Comments and real criticism are two different things for most writers, thinking they are half way there.

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   Marsha Hposted 13 years ago

   LegendaryN8, are you still available for some critiquing?  I have an older hub that's score is dropping and I'd like to revive it if possible.  Feel free to rip it up, I'm not the sensitive type.
   
   http://marshah.hubpages.com/hub/Go-Gree … ccessories
   
   TIA

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