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Want constructive criticism of a specific hub or set of hubs?

  1. LegendaryN8 profile image60
    LegendaryN8posted 6 years ago

    http://s2.hubimg.com/u/5443405_f248.jpg

    I put this in the "answers" section and it actually should've been posted here.

    Many of us may be not performing to our fullest potential because we haven't taken a critical eye to each others' content.  I would like to offer you some constructive criticism.  If you have a hub or set of hubs that you would like to receive critical feedback for, drop the hub link here, and I will leave critical feedback on your hub.  Keep in mind this feedback may not always be *positive*, but it will definitely provoke some thought.

    If you do not want to publicly declare that you want critical feedback (but still would like to receive feedback), you can send me an email, and I will leave you some critical commentary on your hub.

    1. Zenofsong profile image60
      Zenofsongposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      http://zenofsong.hubpages.com/hub/Turni … on-and-EFT

      Please tear apart this hub to the best of your ability. smile

      1. LegendaryN8 profile image60
        LegendaryN8posted 6 years agoin reply to this

        Did you take it down?  I can not view it.

        1. Zenofsong profile image60
          Zenofsongposted 6 years agoin reply to this

          Sorry, you can find this topic here: http://zenofsong.hubpages.com/hub/How-T … h-Hypnosis

          1. LegendaryN8 profile image60
            LegendaryN8posted 6 years agoin reply to this

            Got it!  Sorry for delay, I will get everyone a response this weekend.  It's been a crazy week!

          2. LegendaryN8 profile image60
            LegendaryN8posted 6 years agoin reply to this

            Zen, you have a comment posted to the link you gave me.

    2. Perry Fender profile image66
      Perry Fenderposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      I have a tendency to develop "verbal diarrhea" and beat a dead horse until it's hamburger -- my first "published" hub that I wrote strictly for HP: http://perryfender.hubpages.com/hub/Rea … d-Property

      I'm terribly curious if there is a way to "cherry pick" advertisements on HP - I wrote a hub on the dangers of revolving credit card debt and Google's AdSense linked advertisements for credit cards -- seems like after reading a hub on the dangers of revolving debt, the last thing a reader would do is click such an advertisement.  I do not mind writing "public service announcements" -- but it would be nice to choose advertisements that readers are likely to click to see exactly how sustainable it would be to write on HP.

      1. LegendaryN8 profile image60
        LegendaryN8posted 6 years agoin reply to this

        Perry, you have a comment posted to the link you gave me.

      2. LegendaryN8 profile image60
        LegendaryN8posted 6 years agoin reply to this

        I left a comment for you on the link you gave me here.

        1. Perry Fender profile image66
          Perry Fenderposted 6 years agoin reply to this

          Thank you -- I'll try to pair it down or at least "break it up" into more digestable segments.  I appreciate the feedback!

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      msivakumarposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      Hi,

      Please review http://msivakumar.hubpages.com

      I've been about one month here and I have a set of 13 hubs. Please review at your convenience and let me know the feedback (and constructive criticism) as well !!.

      Thanks in advance.

      Regards,
      Sivakumar

      1. LegendaryN8 profile image60
        LegendaryN8posted 6 years agoin reply to this

        I went over your cricket hub - I really hope you expand on this because I know absolutely nothing about cricket!

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          msivakumarposted 6 years agoin reply to this

          Sure. Will try to do it Legend !!

          Peep in when you have time and give your feedback !

          Thanks.

    4. NMLady profile image83
      NMLadyposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      Hi, 

      I want to make money w/hubs.  I have http://nmlady.hubpages.com/  and also a hub for my students BusinessOpsMngmnt.

      I would appreciate constructive critcism.

      Thanks,
      NMLady

      1. LegendaryN8 profile image60
        LegendaryN8posted 6 years agoin reply to this

        I wrote a comment in your El Morrow National Park Hub.  Since you have over 40 hubs, it is difficult to just go over one and take a fine tooth comb over it.  I saw that you have an interest in cooking though.  If you could, could you please put in a particular hub that you would like me to look at?

  2. Escobana profile image81
    Escobanaposted 6 years ago

    I'm always in for some extra criticism! I have only four Hubs, all about the same topic. Shoot and let me know where I can improve a part from adding adds of Amazone.

    I'm a fan of you:-) The Hub "How many waiters can you meet in one day?" had to be taken down. The one you commented on. It wasn't original content but totally different than the rest. A light topic it was.

    I'd like to know if my Hubs, inform you in a different way about Bipolar Disorder than the other Hubs there are about this topic? I try to be as original as possible.

    Furthermore I'd like some criticism on my grammar and writing style.

    I'll be looking forward to your comments:-)

    1. LegendaryN8 profile image60
      LegendaryN8posted 6 years agoin reply to this

      I will take a good look at what you have up so far on the order of hubs and provide some effective criticism this weekend! = D

      1. Escobana profile image81
        Escobanaposted 6 years agoin reply to this

        Great! Take your time anyway....I'm not in a hurry:-)

        1. LegendaryN8 profile image60
          LegendaryN8posted 6 years agoin reply to this

          LOL I wrote a comment on your "Sweetheart? What about a bigger boobs?" hub.

          1. Escobana profile image81
            Escobanaposted 6 years agoin reply to this

            Thanks! I made a change considering your comment and will respond in my Hub to the rest later. LOL I'm glad you liked it.

  3. Uninvited Writer profile image82
    Uninvited Writerposted 6 years ago

    This entire forum is for constructive criticism, no need for a separate thread.

    1. Perry Fender profile image66
      Perry Fenderposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      Ouch!

    2. LegendaryN8 profile image60
      LegendaryN8posted 6 years agoin reply to this

      Ever notice how someone will put a post for criticism and it will go unread?  That's why I made a *thread* about it.

      Just because someone posts their hub in extreme hub makeover, does not mean they are looking for *constructive criticism*.  They may want comments, but not everyone can handle *constructive criticism*.

      1. Escobana profile image81
        Escobanaposted 6 years agoin reply to this

        True! By reading this post and the offer to help out, it was brought to my attention in a more effective way. Comments and real criticism are two different things for most writers, thinking they are half way there.

  4. Marsha H profile image61
    Marsha Hposted 6 years ago

    LegendaryN8, are you still available for some critiquing?  I have an older hub that's score is dropping and I'd like to revive it if possible.  Feel free to rip it up, I'm not the sensitive type. smile

    http://marshah.hubpages.com/hub/Go-Gree … ccessories

    TIA

 
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