Would love some feedback
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Alright, I read this one - and note my observations.
http://hubpages.com/hub/MayfairHotels
- I wasn't sure what you were trying to say
- used Mayfair a lot (keyword stuffing?)
- well written
- interesting tidbits (monopoly, history, Dylan)
Over all, I was sort of left wondering, huh? It is good to have a point, lead was good, tidbits were interesting, but I was left wondering where I was supposed to go with the info. You've got good writing skills, just need to focus it more. I'd suggest looking at other 'travel' hubs to get a 'feel' on developing your own 'style' of writing. You can add video and related links also to help 'prolong' your reader's stay
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