http://mydniterose.hubpages.com/hub/DIY … -and-music
This is my first hub and I'm trying to find out if I'm on the right track. Any advice would be amazing. Thank you
You have an interesting topic. I am looking forward to reading about your journey. The things I noticed, and I am going to be critical, is you do not have a hook, it is not broken down well, and lacks substance.
Having a hook: It is important to create a hook that will draw readers in. I lacked this at first also, but have made sure to include a good hook on each of my hubs since then. Look at my hubs and you will se what I mean.
I also noticed some of your sentences are a little lengthy. You might want to go back and look at that. Your paragraphs are also running together a little. One fellow hubber showed me how you must have plenty of breaks so your reader will not get bored.
You could add a little more substance to your hub by explaining how you can make your own veil. Referring to another location is great, but if I don't want to go there, i will not learn anything.
Try adding a little step by step instruction in there for veil making.
You are on the right track with your subject and all, I would just go back and reread to enhance the presentation of the information.
I am not an expert but I think I have done failry well on here and I surely have learned alot with the help from other hubbers.
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