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I just read your hub on breeding clown fish (and your boot camp hub). You had a lot of great info in them. I especially enjoyed the boot camp hub b/c it brought back a lot of memories.
A couple things to watch for:
You do have paragraphs but you might want to make them shorter, break them up a little more.
Do a little proofreading. Your spelling is pretty decent but I noticed "probly" instead of "probably" and "here" instead of "hear" (or maybe it was vice versa, can't remember now).
But overall, I think what you have is fine. Keep up the writing and stay safe if you're still in and overseas.
Thank you! yeah i try to proof read but I'm not the best at grammer. Going in now and correcting what you've pointed out. Thanks again!
no problem! Find a friend who's good at English and who might be willing to proofread your stuff. The content is interesting though
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