http://busygal.hubpages.com/hub/busygal … acuum-suck
New at this and in need of guidance. Be gentle.
Welcome to hubpages busygal!
You did great with your first hub! I like your sense of humor and how you make your vacuum cleaner experience fun and interesting.
I like your writing style, and how you used several text capsules. Maybe you could add a photo of your Shark, or even you or your husband vacuuming, that would be a great addition.
I enjoyed it. After owning a cleaning business for years, I think I have tried every vacuum. Not a Shark though. Too expensive for employees to break.
I agree with all...pics tell a thousand words!
Have a great day!
Welcome to HubPages. You are off to a great start. Great language, humor, and an honest review. I agree that photos would be the best addition here.
Hi busygal. I agree about your excellent writing style. Great narrative flow and attention to detail. Along with a few pictures (get ones that are cleared for commercial use here: flickr commercial images) (oh, and cite them properly, as detailed here: Legal Image Use), consider changing your title to make it more search-friendly.
Imagine that you're on Google, looking for vacuum recommendations. What will you type? Probably "vacuum reviews" or "best vacuum." Include some of these words. "Does your vacuum suck? A review of the best". Now, imagine that you've typed your search terms, and you're browsing. Which one will you click? I'd click the one with your funny title (maybe after looking at a few exhaustive reviews). Best of luck!
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