This hub has been bugging me ever since I've published it

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   mariexotoniposted 13 years ago

   http://mariexotoni.hubpages.com/hub/Emb … n-Introver
   
   some people seem to like it- this SHOULD be one of my better hubs, but it is sorely lacking..
   
   Help please- I'm willing to re-write the whole thing.. prefer not to, rather just add..
   
   help, help

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      Bedbugabscondposted 13 years agoin reply to this

      The first thing I notice is the title. I don't think many people would type that in to a search engine. Maybe add "how to...". I dunno. Also. I kind of like sub headings that split content up and tell me what each section is about. That is my personal preference though, I have no idea if that would help with traffic.

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      self absorbedposted 13 years agoin reply to this

      I thought this was a great hub.  Maybe try dropping "Embracing Being An" from the title, if that doesn't work you could try putting it in a different category.  I definitely don't think the hub requires a re-write though, I found it very interesting and well-written.

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   Dame Scribeposted 13 years ago

   Alright, I found too much text so you need to break them up more. Keep paragraphs at a guesstimate of anywhere from 6-8 or 12 lines long. When you write, answer the what, where, who, when, why and how. I had no idea what you were going on about and if nobody understands those terms, well .... I felt that I was taken all over the board and left abandoned with something but no idea what. You have some good tips just need a bit more organization.

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      mary615posted 13 years agoin reply to this

      I agree.  I read it and thought it needed some breaking up.  I like to see more paragraphs (text capsules) each with a separate heading.  Otherwise, I think it's pretty good.  I find the subject fasinating; even wrote about the same myself.  I found a good video for mine.

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         mariexotoniposted 13 years agoin reply to this

         Okay thank you! Gonna fix it up tomorrow

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            mary615posted 13 years agoin reply to this

            Just reread it, and I think it reads a lot better.  Might be fun to add a poll so readers can answer; I think a poll sparks comments.  Like ask:  are you are you an introvert?  Yes or No....
            Just a suggestion:  Look up successful Hubbers, ones that have been here a long time and read their work.  I learn something new each day, but I really learn a lot by reading the "old timers" stuff.

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   fcmosherposted 13 years ago

   I agree that the title isn't too search-engine-friendly. But you might get some traffic by emphasizing well-known names like Gandhi and Einstein. What phrases might someone type into Google when they were looking for famous introverts like these two?

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