This hub has been bugging me ever since I've published it

Jump to Last Post 1-3 of 3 discussions (8 posts)
  1. mariexotoni profile image94
    mariexotoniposted 6 years ago

    http://mariexotoni.hubpages.com/hub/Emb … n-Introver

    some people seem to like it- this SHOULD be one of my better hubs, but it is sorely lacking..

    Help please- I'm willing to re-write the whole thing.. prefer not to, rather just add..

    help, help

    1. Bedbugabscond profile image98
      Bedbugabscondposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      The first thing I notice is the title. I don't think many people would type that in to a search engine. Maybe add "how to...". I dunno. Also. I kind of like sub headings that split content up and tell me what each section is about. That is my personal preference though, I have no idea if that would help with traffic.

    2. self absorbed profile image61
      self absorbedposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      I thought this was a great hub.  Maybe try dropping "Embracing Being An" from the title, if that doesn't work you could try putting it in a different category.  I definitely don't think the hub requires a re-write though, I found it very interesting and well-written.

  2. Dame Scribe profile image60
    Dame Scribeposted 6 years ago

    Alright, I found too much text so you need to break them up more. Keep paragraphs at a guesstimate of anywhere from 6-8 or 12 lines long. When you write, answer the what, where, who, when, why and how. I had no idea what you were going on about and if nobody understands those terms, well .... I felt that I was taken all over the board and left abandoned with something but no idea what. You have some good tips just need a bit more organization. wink

    1. mary615 profile image92
      mary615posted 6 years agoin reply to this

      I agree.  I read it and thought it needed some breaking up.  I like to see more paragraphs (text capsules) each with a separate heading.  Otherwise, I think it's pretty good.  I find the subject fasinating; even wrote about the same myself.  I found a good video for mine.

      1. mariexotoni profile image94
        mariexotoniposted 6 years agoin reply to this

        Okay thank you! Gonna fix it up tomorrow smile

        1. mary615 profile image92
          mary615posted 6 years agoin reply to this

          Just reread it, and I think it reads a lot better.  Might be fun to add a poll so readers can answer; I think a poll sparks comments.  Like ask:  are you are you an introvert?  Yes or No....
          Just a suggestion:  Look up successful Hubbers, ones that have been here a long time and read their work.  I learn something new each day, but I really learn a lot by reading the "old timers" stuff.

  3. fcmosher profile image93
    fcmosherposted 6 years ago

    I agree that the title isn't too search-engine-friendly. But you might get some traffic by emphasizing well-known names like Gandhi and Einstein. What phrases might someone type into Google when they were looking for famous introverts like these two?

 
working

This website uses cookies

As a user in the EEA, your approval is needed on a few things. To provide a better website experience, hubpages.com uses cookies (and other similar technologies) and may collect, process, and share personal data. Please choose which areas of our service you consent to our doing so.

For more information on managing or withdrawing consents and how we handle data, visit our Privacy Policy at: https://hubpages.com/privacy-policy#gdpr

Show Details
Necessary
HubPages Device IDThis is used to identify particular browsers or devices when the access the service, and is used for security reasons.
LoginThis is necessary to sign in to the HubPages Service.
Google RecaptchaThis is used to prevent bots and spam. (Privacy Policy)
AkismetThis is used to detect comment spam. (Privacy Policy)
HubPages Google AnalyticsThis is used to provide data on traffic to our website, all personally identifyable data is anonymized. (Privacy Policy)
HubPages Traffic PixelThis is used to collect data on traffic to articles and other pages on our site. Unless you are signed in to a HubPages account, all personally identifiable information is anonymized.
Amazon Web ServicesThis is a cloud services platform that we used to host our service. (Privacy Policy)
CloudflareThis is a cloud CDN service that we use to efficiently deliver files required for our service to operate such as javascript, cascading style sheets, images, and videos. (Privacy Policy)
Google Hosted LibrariesJavascript software libraries such as jQuery are loaded at endpoints on the googleapis.com or gstatic.com domains, for performance and efficiency reasons. (Privacy Policy)
Features
Google Custom SearchThis is feature allows you to search the site. (Privacy Policy)
Google MapsSome articles have Google Maps embedded in them. (Privacy Policy)
Google ChartsThis is used to display charts and graphs on articles and the author center. (Privacy Policy)
Google AdSense Host APIThis service allows you to sign up for or associate a Google AdSense account with HubPages, so that you can earn money from ads on your articles. No data is shared unless you engage with this feature. (Privacy Policy)
Google YouTubeSome articles have YouTube videos embedded in them. (Privacy Policy)
VimeoSome articles have Vimeo videos embedded in them. (Privacy Policy)
PaypalThis is used for a registered author who enrolls in the HubPages Earnings program and requests to be paid via PayPal. No data is shared with Paypal unless you engage with this feature. (Privacy Policy)
Facebook LoginYou can use this to streamline signing up for, or signing in to your Hubpages account. No data is shared with Facebook unless you engage with this feature. (Privacy Policy)
MavenThis supports the Maven widget and search functionality. (Privacy Policy)
Marketing
Google AdSenseThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
Google DoubleClickGoogle provides ad serving technology and runs an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
Index ExchangeThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
SovrnThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
Facebook AdsThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
Amazon Unified Ad MarketplaceThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
AppNexusThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
OpenxThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
Rubicon ProjectThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
TripleLiftThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
Say MediaWe partner with Say Media to deliver ad campaigns on our sites. (Privacy Policy)
Remarketing PixelsWe may use remarketing pixels from advertising networks such as Google AdWords, Bing Ads, and Facebook in order to advertise the HubPages Service to people that have visited our sites.
Conversion Tracking PixelsWe may use conversion tracking pixels from advertising networks such as Google AdWords, Bing Ads, and Facebook in order to identify when an advertisement has successfully resulted in the desired action, such as signing up for the HubPages Service or publishing an article on the HubPages Service.
Statistics
Author Google AnalyticsThis is used to provide traffic data and reports to the authors of articles on the HubPages Service. (Privacy Policy)
ComscoreComScore is a media measurement and analytics company providing marketing data and analytics to enterprises, media and advertising agencies, and publishers. Non-consent will result in ComScore only processing obfuscated personal data. (Privacy Policy)
Amazon Tracking PixelSome articles display amazon products as part of the Amazon Affiliate program, this pixel provides traffic statistics for those products (Privacy Policy)