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An Extraterrestrial Point of View

Updated on December 11, 2012

Observation Consternation

Earth creatures, you all have not lived,

to our expectations, and you lack certain skills,

Your bad habits are smothering your advancement,

the positive qualities, to be fulfilled.

The greed and need for power and control,

all play their part, and are a universal fault,

The tendencies that you all seem to have,

destruction of your fellows, in every assault.

Why should we want to share with you,

our technology, and secrets of the brotherhood,

You, who would conquer all who stand,

and those who may not, we all know that you would.?

You bring your best statements of the goodness,

as your plan, yet, change your minds, again,

The need for trust, the care and sharing all must give,

seems to escape your grasp, as it is in vain.

You strike fear into the spirits of our creeds,

the hostilities, and your unforgiving needs,

To live among you, a lesson in great regrets,

the loss of a soul and the remorse, it begets.

Search on, oh, lost brothers and sisters of the Earth,

yours, is the inherited genes, at birth.

As the mighty stars, do cast their lighted beams,

there is much work yet to do, to prove your worth.

Remember us, for we were a willing friend,

to give a helping hand, in this world to rise, once again,

Do not be sad and lose your desire and to search,

For you must know, ours to grow, in its resolving end,

Explore the universal orbits and the planes,

for in your exploration then, all will be, for your gains.

Please, forgive us, to think that we all could co-exist,

for your lack of conscience, it still remains.

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A better world some where, one day?
A better world some where, one day?


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    • Au fait profile image

      C E Clark 

      5 years ago from North Texas

      If extraterrestrials do exist and are studying us, I wonder if they view us anything like the members of the Lewis & Clark Expedition viewed new Earth creatures they happened upon in their travel? In case you are wondering, new creatures were killed, skinned, and cooked to see if they had any practical value for people. ;)

      Very insightful.

    • whonunuwho profile imageAUTHOR


      6 years ago from United States

      Thanks Faith Reaper..I was speaking with a grain of truth in this work, although I did try to lighten the mood, with the humor of cartoons. Glad you liked. whonu

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      Faith Reaper 

      6 years ago from southern USA

      Very clever indeed as to what those others who may be looking down at us here on earth and what they truly see. Great write and art!!! Great message too.

      Voted Way Up

      God bless. In His Love, Faith Reaper

    • whonunuwho profile imageAUTHOR


      6 years ago from United States

      Thanks for your reading my work, Mhatter, and hope you were amused.

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      Martin Kloess 

      6 years ago from San Francisco

      Very entertaining. Thank you


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