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... Cruciferous Conclusion ...

Updated on October 3, 2012

I could try

all day

I could pray

all night

I could stop

and think

about what

I have not

done right

I could do

everything

you asked me to

I could

come to

the cruciferous conclusion

that it will never

appease you

and I will accept it

But

will you?


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    Rob Welsh 4 years ago from Tomorrow - In Words & NZ Time.

    Well your poetry is read in NZ now and that's something that I can not say of my own :) I have a feeling that many will read and appreciate the poet when she steps into the light... hahaha.... bring your shades... incognito is the dress code, if it too bright... as I have said, thank you for your talent and unique voice Carole... take care.. PD

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    Carole Anzolletti 4 years ago from The Phantom Queen's Labyrinth

    I am glad you see through and between the lines - and I am grateful to share with wonderful people like you! :)

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    Rob Welsh 4 years ago from Tomorrow - In Words & NZ Time.

    What a beautiful piece of honesty... one too good to be ignored and remain unanswered.. excellent imagery and strength... thank you so much for your talent and your voice.... take care.. PD

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