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... Cruciferous Conclusion ...
I could try
all day
I could pray
all night
I could stop
and think
about what
I have not
done right
I could do
everything
you asked me to
I could
come to
the cruciferous conclusion
that it will never
appease you
and I will accept it
But
will you?
Comments
Well your poetry is read in NZ now and that's something that I can not say of my own :) I have a feeling that many will read and appreciate the poet when she steps into the light... hahaha.... bring your shades... incognito is the dress code, if it too bright... as I have said, thank you for your talent and unique voice Carole... take care.. PD
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I am glad you see through and between the lines - and I am grateful to share with wonderful people like you! :)
What a beautiful piece of honesty... one too good to be ignored and remain unanswered.. excellent imagery and strength... thank you so much for your talent and your voice.... take care.. PD