"A Dark Faery Tale" #2: Ariel
Ariel
A demon faery of the sea,
wants to play a game with me.
Her eyes bright and yellow,
like the anglerfish she keeps.
Her smile just as menacing,
and as sharp as his teeth.
Hair fiery red,
like blood in the water.
Who would have thought,
this was King Triton's daughter?
A deadly pitchfork in one hand,
Ursula must have taught her.
Her skin full of crust as it starts to decay,
from a million years of ocean corroding it away.
Dirty and dingy, her fin split in half.
She just taunts me with her evil laugh.
To become human she must eat our souls,
and take them wherever she goes.
To stay human she must find love,
so she swims to the surface up above,
looking for a prince to condemn and conquer.
First thing first, she'll make him love her.
Then she'll send his soul to hell.
Beware, the little mermaid, her name is Ariel.
- "A Dark Faery Tale" #4: Snow White & the Seven Demons
A collection of poems - "A Dark Faery Tale" #3 - Jasmine
A collection of poems - "A Dark Faery Tale"
© 2011 Nikki Wicked
Comments
AUTHORhaha good. that was the idea. :)
Wonderful twist on the Little Mermaid. I'll never look at Ariel the same.
Wow! Love this one Nikki!
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lol!! A crackhead for souls! lol
Indeed it was, i mean you turned her into the crackhead of the sea, lol
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hahha awww i love the little mermaid but yea i get your point. hehe this one is way better
I thank you for this one, when i was a kid, my cousins would come over, who are girls and watch with my mom that stupid mermaid movie, hogging the tv, man i couldn't wait for that movie or show or whatever the f... it was to go off, damn, lol...
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yep yep, she was a demon faery took cindys soul lol
Sounds like her faery mother was a complete bitch. LOL.
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thanx flying fish and nighthag!
so very good in such a bad way, I love it!
awesome!
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ive never heard that saying but ok lol.
Super hub.
This hub puts a new twist to the saying "Never talk to strange women especially when they are of the mermaid ilk. lol
Ghaelach
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hahaha your mommy should love you no matter what, but yea definitely a twist, she kind of got cursed into being evil, the faery god mother tricked her into missing curfew and she had to pay with her soul.
Well this has dumped my kids view of Disney out the airlock. Ha. Me kidding. The Cinderella one was fun too. Sounded like a John Carpenter film in the making. But I love the way you took the stereotypical view of the girl and knocked it out of the ball park and we got this bad gal here. Maybe this in all of us, we all have a bad side. But we repress it and filter it, so our mommies will love us. LOL.
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thank u fay. yes indeed, looks, or should i say sounds, can be deceiving.
What an imagination you have, Nikki! The poem is great. I'd sure hate to run into that Ariel. Such a pretty name for someone so ugly. :)
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thanx guys, bella did u catch the one i wrote about cinderella? more to come.
Ha! This was groovy Gurl! I totally loved the evil side of Ariel quite the imagination here. Votep Up and Awesome.
smiles :)
bella
Ariel,the finned demon water sucubus,needless to say,this is the twist of the day.;)
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