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"A Dark Faery Tale" #2: Ariel

Updated on August 23, 2017

Ariel

A demon faery of the sea,
wants to play a game with me.
Her eyes bright and yellow,
like the anglerfish she keeps.
Her smile just as menacing,
and as sharp as his teeth.

Hair fiery red,
like blood in the water.
Who would have thought,
this was King Triton's daughter?
A deadly pitchfork in one hand,
Ursula must have taught her.

Her skin full of crust as it starts to decay,
from a million years of ocean corroding it away.
Dirty and dingy, her fin split in half.
She just taunts me with her evil laugh.

To become human she must eat our souls,
and take them wherever she goes.
To stay human she must find love,
so she swims to the surface up above,
looking for a prince to condemn and conquer.
First thing first, she'll make him love her.
Then she'll send his soul to hell.
Beware, the little mermaid, her name is Ariel.

© 2011 Nikki Wicked

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    • Nikkij504gurl profile imageAUTHOR

      Nikki Wicked 

      3 years ago from Louisiana

      haha good. that was the idea. :)

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      John Hansen 

      3 years ago from Queensland Australia

      Wonderful twist on the Little Mermaid. I'll never look at Ariel the same.

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      Audrey Howitt 

      5 years ago from California

      Wow! Love this one Nikki!

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      Nikki Wicked 

      7 years ago from Louisiana

      lol!! A crackhead for souls! lol

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      DarkDisOrder 

      7 years ago from B.A.D. (Beyond All Dimensions)

      Indeed it was, i mean you turned her into the crackhead of the sea, lol

    • Nikkij504gurl profile imageAUTHOR

      Nikki Wicked 

      7 years ago from Louisiana

      hahha awww i love the little mermaid but yea i get your point. hehe this one is way better

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      DarkDisOrder 

      7 years ago from B.A.D. (Beyond All Dimensions)

      I thank you for this one, when i was a kid, my cousins would come over, who are girls and watch with my mom that stupid mermaid movie, hogging the tv, man i couldn't wait for that movie or show or whatever the f... it was to go off, damn, lol...

    • Nikkij504gurl profile imageAUTHOR

      Nikki Wicked 

      7 years ago from Louisiana

      yep yep, she was a demon faery took cindys soul lol

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      Cathy Nerujen 

      7 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Sounds like her faery mother was a complete bitch. LOL.

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      Nikki Wicked 

      7 years ago from Louisiana

      thanx flying fish and nighthag!

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      K.A.E Grove 

      7 years ago from Australia

      so very good in such a bad way, I love it!

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      flying_fish 

      7 years ago from GTA

      awesome!

    • Nikkij504gurl profile imageAUTHOR

      Nikki Wicked 

      7 years ago from Louisiana

      ive never heard that saying but ok lol.

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      Ghaelach 

      7 years ago

      Super hub.

      This hub puts a new twist to the saying "Never talk to strange women especially when they are of the mermaid ilk. lol

      Ghaelach

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      Nikki Wicked 

      7 years ago from Louisiana

      hahaha your mommy should love you no matter what, but yea definitely a twist, she kind of got cursed into being evil, the faery god mother tricked her into missing curfew and she had to pay with her soul.

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      Cathy Nerujen 

      7 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Well this has dumped my kids view of Disney out the airlock. Ha. Me kidding. The Cinderella one was fun too. Sounded like a John Carpenter film in the making. But I love the way you took the stereotypical view of the girl and knocked it out of the ball park and we got this bad gal here. Maybe this in all of us, we all have a bad side. But we repress it and filter it, so our mommies will love us. LOL.

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      Nikki Wicked 

      7 years ago from Louisiana

      thank u fay. yes indeed, looks, or should i say sounds, can be deceiving.

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      Fay Paxton 

      7 years ago

      What an imagination you have, Nikki! The poem is great. I'd sure hate to run into that Ariel. Such a pretty name for someone so ugly. :)

      up/awesome

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      Nikki Wicked 

      7 years ago from Louisiana

      thanx guys, bella did u catch the one i wrote about cinderella? more to come.

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      Erica Sanchez 

      7 years ago from California

      Ha! This was groovy Gurl! I totally loved the evil side of Ariel quite the imagination here. Votep Up and Awesome.

      smiles :)

      bella

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      Mentalist acer 

      7 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

      Ariel,the finned demon water sucubus,needless to say,this is the twist of the day.;)

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