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A Father's Love - A Poem

Updated on May 19, 2015


Edge of Darkness


A father’s love

Sent from above

To nurture and care

Even if the feelings are bare


No matter the distance

No matter how extensive

There is never a chance

To forget and leave


Ones daughter who is so special

My, my you think it’s typical

Yet, it is not, she is a princess

Daddy is on the rescue when she’s in distress


She is placed on a pedestal,

Daddy’s love is unequivocal

Beware of those who hurt her

He won’t leave anything unturned even your hair


He will follow you at the earth’s edge

Like a bull who is full of rage

For you’ve mistakenly touched his daughter

He will turn upside down your lair


No matter where you are

He is sure to wage a war

Up to his last breath

He will avenge his daughter’s death…


Note: Inspired by the movie Edge of Darkness starred by Mel Gibson...

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      Demas W Jasper 5 years ago from Today's America and The World Beyond

      Take a feeling and make it a poem by which others can feel, too. Nicely done.

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      raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      Hello Demas! thank you for the comment...and yes the movie is touching...

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      Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

      so emotional, charged,, well written poem Raci..

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      Susan Zutautas 5 years ago from Ontario, Canada

      Was thinking of my dad today and how much I miss him, and came to read your poem.

      Beautiful!

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      raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      hello Frank...that's so kind of you...thank you for the support as always...

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      raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      Hello Susan...thank you for sharing your experience with your Dad...i haven't experienced having my father...he died when I was young...so it's kind of hard for me to let my imagination flow through me...

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      Vinaya Ghimire 5 years ago from Nepal

      Superb! Emotionally charged! Powerfully expressed! Beautiful!

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      raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      thank you Vinaya for leaving a wonderful comment...have a great day...

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      Micky Dee 5 years ago

      Nicely done raciniwa.

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      raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      Hello Micky...thank you...have a great day...

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      epigramman 5 years ago

      great powerful, masterful writing ...... yes my dad was my best friend in my life (as was my mum too) ....... you have so much passion in your words here and this is what puts you on such on a world class level as a poet. lake erie time 9:19am

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      Vinaya Ghimire 5 years ago from Nepal

      Edge of Darkness is a wonderful about father's love to his daughter. Your poetry is even better.

      Happy Father's Day

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      Vincent Moore 5 years ago

      You did a beautiful job of describing the love a dad exudes to his beloved daughter. He will always be there for her no matter what, so true. I have two of my own and think of them often. Peace and blessings to you my poetic friend.

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      Mike Pugh 5 years ago from New York City

      Powerful poem about a father love, its was well written, and very creative indeed Raciniwa, nice job I loved it, and especially the climax ending such drama and true fatherly love. Voted up & out!

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      Bill Holland 5 years ago from Olympia, WA

      Great poem, Raci! You did a wonderful job of capturing how many of us feel about our fathers.

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      raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      Hello Colin!!!i'm glad you have your dad as your best friend while i grow up having none...yet, i visualize in my mind what a great the main character would be...thank you for your support...

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      raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      Yeah, it's a great story Vinaya, and a very inspiring one...thank you for visiting...

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      raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      that's a father should always be Vincent, but sad to say there are many who have not experienced that, and there are fathers who are deprived also to show their love to their children, but there are father's who really don't know how to become one...Peace be with you and blessings be upon you too...thanks for sharing your time with me...

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      raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      Hello Mike!!!great to see you and read your wonderful comment...thank you for visiting, and have a great day!!!please do watch the movie...it is so touching indeed!!!

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      raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      hello Bill! it took me some time to write this, for i couldn't capture the right emotions at first, for i didn't grow with my father, and my memories of him were clouded by his constant bickering with my mother...yet, i envisioned Mel Gibson as the father i didn't have...thank you for visiting...

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      Girish puri 5 years ago from NCR , INDIA

      A real tribute, voted up

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      raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      hello girishpuri...thank you for the nice comment...have a great day!!!

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      ailen ferrer 4 years ago

      Im sorry maam I cnt relate this... u knw alredy the reason

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      raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      it's ok dai...actually, at first i was hesitant to deal on this topic because i too haven't experienced the love of the father...yet i realized why should i deprive myself of that moment to relish that love even if it is seen only in movie...

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      Demas W Jasper 4 years ago from Today's America and The World Beyond

      We love our daughters and always want the very best for them in a world which in some of its countries demeans and trivializes them.

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      raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      i am happy to know that you are one of the admirable fathers i long for...your daughter is lucky to have you...have a great day...

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      Dim Flaxenwick 4 years ago from Great Britain

      Beautiful poem and so very true.

      I found you on twitter and am so happy to start followng such a good writer.

      The music you´ve chosen here is also lovely.

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      raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      hello Dim...thanks for visiting...

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      ahorseback 4 years ago

      Hi Girl , I must say I have a baby girl ! Even though she's thirty five I would avenge the very act , the man , even the whole darned world if anyone ever ever hurt her ! I cannot stand injustice in any form and there is so much of that today , Someone once said and I love it " "There is justice and then there is the law" , vengeance comes under the term justice ...........Awesome write ! Huggs !

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      raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      that's so noble of you...yes, some fathers nowadays forget their role to their children, that's why some grow up confused with their identity...very seldom that we find fathers who would really go to such great lengths in protecting their child...

      you're an awesome father too Ed...hugs back...thank you...

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      DREAM ON 4 years ago

      Your emotion is vivid and your thoughts are loving.Thanx for sharing.

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      raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      and thank you too for visiting...have a pleasant time...

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      Denise Handlon 4 years ago from North Carolina

      Awesome poem, Raciniwa-very touching. I loved the music. :)

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      raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      yes, i find this very touching indeed...thank you for visiting Denise...have a great day...

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      rOBERT hEWETT SR. 4 years ago from Louisville, Kentucky

      A wonderful tribute Raciniwa, my dad raised me from age 3 and I hold his memories dear (See my hub MY FATHER'S STORIES". Thanks for sharing this great feeling.

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      raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      i'm glad to share kinship with you Robert...i'll surely love to read your tribute to your father...bless you...

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