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A Love-Note of Blank Verse.

Updated on December 16, 2013
Palatial surroundings for a princess.
Palatial surroundings for a princess.

Everlasting Love

It seems that if I´d like to, I could be a Queen,

You already think I am Princess.

Is it what I´d like, to wear a weighty crown?

And set a good example---- never show a frown.

I know, to you, that I could be a Queen.

One step up from where you see me now.

But is it what I need or want?

Is it even real?.


You see me as a Princess.

I treasure you for that,

But elevation----- greater heights-----?

I fear could spell disaster.


What we have is beautiful.

Everlasting love.

Expectations raised often reek of failure.

We've seen fire and water,

We've danced in the rain.

We've seen lights so bright.... they dazzle...

And darkness , deep that could have dragged us down.

Or torn us wide apart.,

Separated our hearts.

But No!. Through Hell and Heaven,

Always we have made it.

A princess and her lover,

is what you insist we are.

I have no need of further elevation,

Have no desire to become Queen,

I relish all the places we have been,

The many hours we have spent together,

All the stormy weather,

And the love that saw us through.

What time we have left ,contents me as I am.

I have no need of more than you.

And being your Princess.


As l age , and so do you, methinks this is still how you see me.
As l age , and so do you, methinks this is still how you see me.

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    Dim Flaxenwick 4 years ago from Great Britain

    Thank you so much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. I´m rather way behind in doing ths.

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    Justin W Price 4 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

    Dim, I liked this very much. It flowed well. The words rolled off the tongue and there wee many surprizing word choices. Nicely done.

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    Dim Flaxenwick 4 years ago from Great Britain

    What a beautiful comment, such a wonderful expression.... in his love.

    Thank you.

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    Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

    Yes, how lovely, everlasting love . . . and to be someone's princess too!

    Excellent write. Voted up+++ sharing

    In His Love, Faith Reaper

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    Dim Flaxenwick 4 years ago from Great Britain

    Dear Genna East,

    I´m happy you liked the poem and I appreciate you taking thetime to comment.

    Thank you so much.

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    Dim Flaxenwick 4 years ago from Great Britain

    Dear Mhatteroo

    Thank you so much for your comment. I appreciate it.

    I´m glad you felt it went straight to the heart.

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    Genna East 4 years ago from Massachusetts, USA

    What lovely poetry. I especially liked...

    "What time we have left ,contents me as I am.

    I have no need of more than you..."

    There is gentle humility and deep love in these words so beautifully expressed.

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    Martin Kloess 4 years ago from San Francisco

    Very expressive poem. So dear. so straight to the heart. Thank you

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    Dim Flaxenwick 4 years ago from Great Britain

    OUTCH! Sorry to hear of your power out.

    Hope the storm doesn´t do too much damage.

    I appreciate your lovely comment, thank you.

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    Bill Holland 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

    Dim, I would love to write more, but our power is flickering with a major storm blowing through. This is lovely work, but then I expect nothing less from such an accomplished writer. Blessings to you my friend.

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    Dim Flaxenwick 4 years ago from Great Britain

    Oh what a wonderful comment. My energy comes from you and others who encourage me.

    Without you, I would not be able to write at all.

    Thank you so much.

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    cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

    Dim , very sweet. you are more than a queen , you are a beautiful source of energy that shines in our lives with brightness and the beauty of words . great work .

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