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A Poem About Love: Falling Into Wonderland - Part 1
Falling Into Wonderland
Stars light up the sunny sky
The sun shines down on the
River’s night
While the blue water glimmers
Over the waves of cloud
Picture perfect
Is this painted canvas
In my heart it all makes sense
Dancing in a cheerful grace
The leaves flutter on their wings
Whispering with the wind
Capturing its sweet embrace
Up is down
Down is up
Left is right
Right is left
My world’s been turned upside down
Like Alice’s fall into Wonderland
Slowly how the seasons change
Swaying movements melt orange
And coppers farewell
Greeting the dusty white and
Silvery blues
My heart does not notice as I have you
Holding onto me
Weathering the storm
That has not yet come
Intruding into our world
Our immaculate kingdom
Sparks of thunder
Flashing down
Crashing into its own
Lightning sound
Welcoming quiet
Its soothing silence
Encourages my faith
To take up this dance
Once again you stole my heart
I found it locked in a golden box
Glowing hot
Beating faster
Thump, thump, thump
Tempo drops down
Ba-dum, ba-dum, ba-dum
Song emerges, sings of passion
Rhythmically in tune to the lust
Percussion!
Transforms the beat into love-
I know too well it speaks
A melody of us.
©BNadyn 2013
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Comments
- Author
Hi Kenneth, so glad you enjoyed this and I appreciate the vote up. I'll definitely head over and read some of your hubs. :)
Hi, BNaydn,
Nice read here. Great writing. Love your style.
I love abstract/prose poetry. I have a few on HubPages.
Voted up and away because you deserve it. Loved your subject. Keep up the great writing.
I cordially invite you to check two of my hubs and then become one of my followers. I would love that.
Sincerely,
Kenneth/ from northwest Alabaama
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Poetforlife, thank you for reading and for your nice comment. Have a beautiful day. :)
Great poem BNadyn and so moving. The pictures were absolutely awesome. I voted up and hope you continue to share your treasures with us.
- Author
Thank you, Eddy, I plan on having it up tomorrow. Take care, enjoy your day!
A truly wonderful story .
Voted up and looking forward to the second story.
Have a great day.
Eddy.
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