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A Poem About Love: Falling Into Wonderland - Part 2

Updated on September 11, 2013
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Bernadyn is a writer, blogger, and social media influencer. She's written for various publications while writing for her own blog.


Up is down

Down is up

Left is right

Right is left

My world’s been turned upside down

Like Alice’s fall into Wonderland

You raise me up lifting high

Soaring magic and charm


Your wondrous enchantment

Casting spells

On my heart

You start with a bow

A gentleman at your finest

Smiling with precise finesse


My breath needs a

Moment I need to pause

For I am not certain

If this is a dream

From which I need to wake up

Or is it all a fantasy I made up?

Small I grew but tall you made me

Magic mushrooms

And sweet butter bread fly and flutter

Powers to grow smaller or taller


They influence feelings of electric touch

That deliver me to a place of song

Where twinkling lights mixed

With velvet pink memories


Your eyes turn up into a friendly smile

The words on your lips

Capture my hand

Into yours swiftly

Running toward the rabbit hole

Whirling down, down, down...

©BNadyn 2013

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    Bernadyn 3 years ago from Jacksonville, Florida

    Thank you, paulynice roldens! I'll go check it out.

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    Roldens Paulynice 3 years ago from Boca Raton, Florida

    I enjoyed this one. Check this one my friend. I like when you left some good comment for me when you read my story titled Think before You Act. This is a new one I publish:

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    Bernadyn 4 years ago from Jacksonville, Florida

    Kidscrafts, thank you and yes, this was a fun shoot I originally did with my family. My little boy and I started jumping around for the poses. I agree, reality is sweet, too! Enjoy the rest of your day. :-)

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    kidscrafts 4 years ago from Ottawa, Canada

    Great poem! Original to place your pictures that way :-) You obviously had fun with this!

    I know the feeling.... is it a dream.... in my case after being married for 37 years.... there are too many things that happened to be a dream :-) But reality can be sweet too :-)))

    Have a lovely day!

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    Bernadyn 4 years ago from Jacksonville, Florida

    Thank you, I had some fun with those pictures!

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    Bill Holland 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

    Lovely work and it was nice to see pictures of you. Great smile!