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Updated on April 5, 2010

Forget everything bout you

In time I could

I can’t believe

You won’t be on my mind


You won’t linger


You won’t affect me


I won’t die once more

I will never be the same

I won’t need you insanely

I won’t be missing ‘us’

Out of the blue

I know

I’ll wake up

Not chasing you

I am finally


I am over you…

***Of course this was written backwards! You absolutely know I can’t be over you! (Look who’s starting to read from the bottom ;p)


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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      one of those moments eh :) thanks Max!

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      BeyondMax 6 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      I like the title a lot =) I felt like I was twisted and turned with the whole emotional blast, very powerful both ways!

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      Nikki Wicked 7 years ago from Louisiana

      very clever. I like it both ways, forward and backwards. When you put it backwards its a little more sad

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      Just A Voice 8 years ago

      Very clever :)

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      Fehl Dungo 8 years ago from close to you...

      :) thanks Sea

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      seasoning 8 years ago

      interesting up or down

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      Fehl Dungo 8 years ago from close to you...

      Hi Cosette! Thank you :) Lookin forward to read more of you.. I like your thought for the day BTW and Quincy :)

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      cosette 8 years ago

      hah ha that was great! me like...

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      Fehl Dungo 8 years ago from close to you...

      Hey moi friend :) I like your is beautiful. I wrote it backwards. "I can't believe in time I could forget everything about you" that's the real thing..the last phrase if you read it from bottom til up ;p

      I just played with words...perhaps the result of not getting over someone LOL

      I'm happy to see you Cath :) XO

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      Cathy Nerujen 8 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Love can be frustrating and it can be thrilling too. There is always that thing of telling yourself that you are over someone after a relationship has ended. But if I find myself saying things like this, then something in me still feels its not quite ended or out of my system yet. People can have such an effect on us, Blaise. I liked this hub. We are only human. Keep your chin up and believe in yourself. *wow, did I just write that?* :)

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      Fehl Dungo 8 years ago from close to you...

      @Aware - eye thank you ;p

      @Invictus - Yup, dont forget the vanilla ;) Wow, perfect for your business launching! I'll have cheers ahead ;p

      Yup, play and mess up sometimes are quite fun LOL :)

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      I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 8 years ago

      Haha.. hmmm, maybe someday a toast.. one never know how the cards will fall. ;p I am doing well. working on launching a business, this next week. So I am very excited about that!

      Oh, I see.. nice to have a play with words, eh? :) I think my words are ready for some fun too! LOLzzz ;0

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      aware 8 years ago from West Palm Beach Florida.

      eye like it .

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      Fehl Dungo 8 years ago from close to you...

      thanks a lot KR :)

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      Fehl Dungo 8 years ago from close to you...

      Hi,Invictus! :) How are you? I like vanilla, gotta try that one surely ;p Dreaming to have a toast with my fave poet :) Thank you

      Yep, did it reversed LOL I was in the mood to play words and turning around things..But no matter how I reverse things, nothing could change the real feelings...

      "I can't believe in time I could forget everything about you"

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      I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 8 years ago

      Blah?? :) oh, I see.. an orange vodka attack! LOL ~ maybe try vanilla next time, with some sparkling water... ;p

      From the bottom up, eh? good one, blaise! I guess we all have those moments to get over...

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      Fehl Dungo 8 years ago from close to you...

      Hello CM! Yep silly a rewind heheh But someone said it still sounds the same. ekk whatever :)

      Hi, Just! Yep, totally excruciating..

      Hey, Mik! Sometimes I like 'maybes' ;)

      Thanks to you guys!

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      Micky Dee 8 years ago

      Maybe! That would great! Over him/her/us! Maybe!

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      Justine76 8 years ago

      thank you and yeah..the start, what a kick in the pants!! :)

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      carolina muscle 8 years ago from Charlotte, North Carolina

      This is fun !!!

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      Fehl Dungo 8 years ago from close to you...

      Mentalist Acer, thank you! either way, yea :)

      Hey, Just! haha yea crazy love..I ended up writing this silly poem ;) Thanks a lot

      Moulik, hey! Thanks. Wonder why it's excellent :p

      Hi moi friend! Some orange vodka made me even more braver LOL But I'm really not that tough enough...Such taste is so hard to resist..Glad to see you as always ;)

      Hi again, Just! :) Pretty pic, you're beautiful! The start is always the hardest..

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      Justine76 8 years ago

      that must have took alot of spaces to start. :)

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      Cassandra Mantis 8 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

      Wow, Blaise. Getting over someone is very tough. They leave a taste in our mouth, so-to-speak. And the feelings linger. I have been in that position too many times. But you are brave and tough to put it here and shout it out to the world. Way to go! : )

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      Moulik Mistry 8 years ago from Burdwan, West Bengal, India

      This is excellent writing, Blaise...

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      Justine76 8 years ago

      oh my....mad/sad/over love does to us!!

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      Mentalist acer 8 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

      The poem is prophetic in any manner!


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