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I Can't move on- Poem

Updated on February 14, 2011

Night is pulling me into its darkness,

Ur face is all I can see when I close my eyes.

I hear your voice ringing deep in my ears

I lie awake & pray for it to be daylight.


Tears slowly drift down my cheeks

And I hug my pillow tight.

I wipe them away & Ask myself

What can I do to make this right?


You said you were not good enough for me

And that I must carry on...

But how do I live this life,

When you are the only one I would ever want?


Love is All I have to give,

All your pains I shall bear.

Comfort is what I can let you have,

All your restlessness I shall take.

I can watch you sleep for hours ,

And for that I shall stay awake.


You can call me crazy,

you can call me blind.

I can do anything for you,

Coz I know my feelings for you are genuine.


Your single touch keeps me

Going for years together.

Your love is all that I want

And together 'happiness' we can gather.


Your single smile sends

Chills down my spine.

Your eyes intoxicate me

Like the red wine.


The way you look at me,

Sets my insides ablaze.

The extent to which I love you

Always leaves me amazed.


I can sit here forever,

Just looking into your eyes.

The things I see there

Always takes me by surprise.


Every day I fall more & more

Deeply in love with you.

And with each moment that passes by-

My heart longs to be with you.


So, Please don't ask me to move on

Without You how can I carry on..?

Do you still think that you are not good enough for me?

Or is it the other way round..?

I can't go on without you

Coz in you all my lost dreams I've found.


Is there anyone else

Who can love you the way I can?

Please tell me How can I move on

When I want you & only you to be my man?


You are my desire, my dream

My beautiful fantasy.

Oh, Please tell me how can I forget you

When I believed you to be my destiny?


© Copyright Hajira Ehsan

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      Linda Rogers 6 years ago from Minnesota

      This is so beautiful and romantic. Your a really great writer of poetry.

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      Cracknutcase 6 years ago from India,bangalore

      Thank u so much for reading this poem and leaving a comment Minne :) This poem is really close to my heart as its based on what I was feeling when I wrote this one

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Wonderful, I just love poems of love. I hope you will remain in love forever and never have to move on.

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      Cracknutcase 6 years ago from India,bangalore

      Yeah I hope so too Acaetnna :) I am in love with this wonderful feeling, I m in love with the word love itself..

      Thanks for stopping by & reading my poem :)

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      Nick 6 years ago

      Beautiful Poem Cracknutcase...!

      If You did write this for someone special then I would say he is the most luckiest guy to have you in his life...

      God Bess ya!

      Hugs!!

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      Twilight Lawns 6 years ago from Norbury-sur-Mer, Surrey, England. U.K.

      How very sad. I love some of your images:

      "I can watch you sleep for hours ,

      And for that I shall stay awake."

      That's true devotion

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      Cracknutcase 6 years ago from India,bangalore

      Twilight- Thanks for stopping by :) Glad You liked it..!

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      dwaynehood 6 years ago from 9535 Stoney Ridge Lane, JENKINTOWN, PA-19046,USA

      beautiful i like it.

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      Cracknutcase 6 years ago from India,bangalore

      Thanks Dwaynehood... :)

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      Micky Dee 6 years ago

      You've loved really hard. God bless you dear Cracknutcase!

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      Cracknutcase 6 years ago from India,bangalore

      Thank you so much Micky for this lovely comment.. Wish we could get the same amount of love in return....

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      SARAH KHALEEL 6 years ago

      Masha Allah... its jus mind blowin ..awesome thoughts wit intense feelings... Amazin n Incredible My Cute Nutcase :)

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      Cracknutcase 6 years ago from India,bangalore

      Thank you for ur lovely comment sis Sarah(di)... Glad u like it :)

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      Robert 6 years ago

      This is such an intense poem Cracknutcase! Such truth in your words clearly depicts the amount of love you have for that one special person.

      If I were him I would never ask u to move on... :)

      May you be blessed with the one who truly deserves you...

      Take care

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      Cracknutcase 6 years ago from India,bangalore

      I hope so too Robert.. I hope that destiny enfolds whatever plans it has soon enough.. After all who likes waiting?

      Thanks a lot for reading this..

      Have a great day

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      Loveslove 6 years ago from England

      A lovely moving poem..

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      Cracknutcase 6 years ago from India,bangalore

      @Love- I am so in love with ur hubbing name... Thanks for stopping by and taking the time to comment :)I honestly appreciate the interaction :))

      Blessings...!

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      rishworld 6 years ago from Dreammie Kreatiw World..

      Deeply touched.... :(

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      Cracknutcase 6 years ago from India,bangalore

      @Rish-Thanks again for reading & leaving a comment :)

      Have a great day!

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      jami l. pereira 5 years ago

      Awesomely sadly beautiful , thank you for sharing ,

      Peace

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      kikkibabes 5 years ago

      Loved this hub x

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      lostwithinmyself 5 years ago

      So sad, i feel the pain and sorrow!!

      Its hard to get over someone who means the world to you!!

      Voted up! x

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      Cracknutcase 5 years ago from India,bangalore

      Thank you Jami, Kiki and lostwithinmyself. Glad you liked it :)

      Keep smiling always

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      Ashish Joshi 4 years ago from India

      "your single touch keeps me

      going for years together"

      AWESOME...(voted 'up' and beautiful' though').

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      Crazzy Kylex © 2012 4 years ago from Incredible India!

      Another poem on your love. By reading the title, I thought it would be more about your struggle in life, but.. Still lovely :)

      Rated up and appreciated!

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      like the words in the poem, i also loved a man i don't want to let go..because i believed in destiny..that we're always meant for each other. But destiny changed its mind...

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      Dianna Mendez 4 years ago

      This is very deep and touching. It rings of the truth in a relationship that has had it's moments of truth.

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      ifeoma obidike 4 years ago

      i love your poem. you will meet that one person who truly deserve your love.

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