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Cheetah Moon

Updated on January 14, 2011

I feel the rising heat

Supple are the muscles beneath

I stroke the intensity


Light fur I stroke

Taught sinews stretch as she moves

Panting loves illusions


Fingers trace the lines

Round thigh and buttock

Crevices behind her knee


Her brow I touch

Soft cheek lies on the pillow

Stars sparkle in her eye


We are born a purpose

We are purposed passion

The moon breathes a sigh


Forward in the night

Love groans about our lips

As she purrs and stalks a dream


Her fur is the sun

Its light a blazing passion flame!

Lodged deep in here my heart


Nigh on the twilight

Her eyes are the twinkle of the stars

That sparkle for my soul


Her smile is the moon

Ever growing and glowing

Cool warmth doth nourish me.


As dawn breaks upon the sill

All thoughts of love envelope me

I feel the rising heat.

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      ralwus 7 years ago

      A most wonderful metaphor hmr. 'Her smile is the moon Ever growing and glowing Cool warmth doth nourish me.' I especially liked that. Kudos, CC

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      Hmrjmr1 7 years ago from Georgia, USA

      rawlus- Thanks for stopping by and your praise :)

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      50 Caliber 7 years ago from Arizona

      Excellent, you seem to hold several gifts when writing as it comes to this style you have surprised me, quite pleasantly.

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      Hmrjmr1 7 years ago from Georgia, USA

      Thanks 50 Cal I keep polishing the rock in my head in the hope it will one day be a diamond, more likely though just a just a hard lump of grunt puppy mud rock! Thanks!

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      Tom Whitworth 7 years ago from Moundsville, WV

      Hmrjmr1,

      Your poetry is magnificant. I had no idea you could write such powerefull and passionate poetry. Thank you for your poem.

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      Hmrjmr1 7 years ago from Georgia, USA

      Thanks Tom, once in a while, an M&M jumps out of the bowl of mush in my head! Thanks!

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      breakfastpop 7 years ago

      Dear Hmr,

      You have taken me by surprise. You truly are a Renaissance Man, doing so many amazing things so well. Your poetry is absolutely beautiful and powerful.

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      Hmrjmr1 7 years ago from Georgia, USA

      Bpop Thanks so much not sure if its the renaissance or the dark ages but I keep swinging my axe. GBY!

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      Pamela Oglesby 7 years ago from United States

      I am so impressed. I didn't know you could write beautiful poetry and it was magnificent.

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      Hmrjmr1 7 years ago from Georgia, USA

      Pam So Glad you liked it Much Thanks!

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      tantrum 7 years ago from Tropic of Capricorn

      This poem was beautiful !!! You are a poet !! :)

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      Hmrjmr1 7 years ago from Georgia, USA

      Thanks Tantrum and you are one of my many muses!

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      Barbara Eisenberg 7 years ago from Titusville

      You, apparently, have many diverse talents. Beautiful, hmrjmr1.

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      Hmrjmr1 7 years ago from Georgia, USA

      ivori - Thanks so much I'm so glad you liked it!

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      mega1 7 years ago

      Wow - DUDE! This is so beautiful and I may take up musing forever as my avocation! You have made my entire day, week, possibly month - if a pink cheetah can inspire you to this amazing poetry then what will our little greek dreaming muse do for you! her name I believe, is aubligesse! made it up! your input for the tribe is much appreciated!

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      Hmrjmr1 7 years ago from Georgia, USA

      Wow Mega Thanks! One for the Tribe The Tribe for All!

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      sweetie1 7 years ago from India

      hi Hmrjmr,

      this is wow poem, a very good and i am amazed that you are not a professional poet. you should try it.

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      Hmrjmr1 7 years ago from Georgia, USA

      sweetie - Thank you so you are a true sweetie! Glad you liked it.

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      Jess Killmenow 7 years ago from Nowheresville, Eastern United States

      I like the picture you paint so well here.

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      Hmrjmr1 7 years ago from Georgia, USA

      Thanks Jess! Glad you could 'see' the Read!

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      Carol 7 years ago from Michigan

      Never would have dreamed you to be a poet! And a VERY good poet you are! Very well done!!

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      Hmrjmr1 7 years ago from Georgia, USA

      CJV - Thanks so much for you kind words so glad you liked it!

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      tnderhrt23 6 years ago

      this is splendid poetry! Powerful, vivid, passionate, seductive, moving, metaphorical, my...I could go on and on!

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      Hmrjmr1 6 years ago from Georgia, USA

      tnderhrt - Thanks so much for your comment Bless you!

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