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Cheetah Moon
I feel the rising heat
Supple are the muscles beneath
I stroke the intensity
Light fur I stroke
Taught sinews stretch as she moves
Panting loves illusions
Fingers trace the lines
Round thigh and buttock
Crevices behind her knee
Her brow I touch
Soft cheek lies on the pillow
Stars sparkle in her eye
We are born a purpose
We are purposed passion
The moon breathes a sigh
Forward in the night
Love groans about our lips
As she purrs and stalks a dream
Her fur is the sun
Its light a blazing passion flame!
Lodged deep in here my heart
Nigh on the twilight
Her eyes are the twinkle of the stars
That sparkle for my soul
Her smile is the moon
Ever growing and glowing
Cool warmth doth nourish me.
As dawn breaks upon the sill
All thoughts of love envelope me
I feel the rising heat.
Comments
A most wonderful metaphor hmr. 'Her smile is the moon Ever growing and glowing Cool warmth doth nourish me.' I especially liked that. Kudos, CC
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rawlus- Thanks for stopping by and your praise :)
Excellent, you seem to hold several gifts when writing as it comes to this style you have surprised me, quite pleasantly.
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Thanks 50 Cal I keep polishing the rock in my head in the hope it will one day be a diamond, more likely though just a just a hard lump of grunt puppy mud rock! Thanks!
Hmrjmr1,
Your poetry is magnificant. I had no idea you could write such powerefull and passionate poetry. Thank you for your poem.
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Thanks Tom, once in a while, an M&M jumps out of the bowl of mush in my head! Thanks!
Dear Hmr,
You have taken me by surprise. You truly are a Renaissance Man, doing so many amazing things so well. Your poetry is absolutely beautiful and powerful.
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Bpop Thanks so much not sure if its the renaissance or the dark ages but I keep swinging my axe. GBY!
I am so impressed. I didn't know you could write beautiful poetry and it was magnificent.
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Pam So Glad you liked it Much Thanks!
This poem was beautiful !!! You are a poet !! :)
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Thanks Tantrum and you are one of my many muses!
You, apparently, have many diverse talents. Beautiful, hmrjmr1.
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ivori - Thanks so much I'm so glad you liked it!
Wow - DUDE! This is so beautiful and I may take up musing forever as my avocation! You have made my entire day, week, possibly month - if a pink cheetah can inspire you to this amazing poetry then what will our little greek dreaming muse do for you! her name I believe, is aubligesse! made it up! your input for the tribe is much appreciated!
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Wow Mega Thanks! One for the Tribe The Tribe for All!
hi Hmrjmr,
this is wow poem, a very good and i am amazed that you are not a professional poet. you should try it.
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sweetie - Thank you so you are a true sweetie! Glad you liked it.
I like the picture you paint so well here.
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Thanks Jess! Glad you could 'see' the Read!
Never would have dreamed you to be a poet! And a VERY good poet you are! Very well done!!
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CJV - Thanks so much for you kind words so glad you liked it!
this is splendid poetry! Powerful, vivid, passionate, seductive, moving, metaphorical, my...I could go on and on!
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tnderhrt - Thanks so much for your comment Bless you!
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