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Come Sit By Me A While VIII:Shallow Waters.

Updated on October 1, 2012
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Come sit by me a while each and everyone of you;I found this song 'Shallow Waters' sung by 'Chris Norman' on YouTube and I sat back to listen to the words;I am sure many of us will be able to relate.

I am not materialistic ;my happiness I find amidst Mother Nature's priceless gifts of unconditional love.

However not everyone shares these ways or beliefs.

Here is a story of true love so one sided and how it was doomed from the start.

To be in love can sometimes cause us to travel somewhat blinkered ;but those niggling doubts will surface from time to time and cannot be hidden forever.

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I thought you loved me so

I gave my heart so true.

Oh how I loved you so

My days so still and blue!!!

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Acrostic:Shallow Waters.

So painful so raw

Happiness clinging on

Although I knew of your ways

Leaning on nothing cannot last

Love cannot thrive single handed.

Oh my heart you broke

Why did it have to be so.

x

Why did you have to be shallow

Although I knew you were so

Through rosy hues I looked

Eventually my fragile heart

Ripped in two.



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Crying to myself

So much heartache cuts right through

No more tears to cry.

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On waters so clear and blue.

I wore my heart on my sleeve.

I loved you will all my being

I'd would never have deceived.

x

I so feel in love in an instance

Emotions flowed round and round.

Love songs deeply filled my heart

What a wondrous magical sound.

x

My emotions in a true landslide

My heart so full of love

Reaching deep into my spirit

Carried by a pure white dove.

x

Today I look back at those days

When I believed I'd found my prince.

The pain so sharp and powerful

The memories still make me wince.

x

Today shall I carry on walking

My coping method switched on.

My heartbeat sure and free

The past now is gone.



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Shallow

A heart so hard

Words each so meaningless

I so loved you right from the start

I opened my heart with trusting motions

Small niggles ignored but still there

Open up and believe

A heart not true

Shallow.






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I wear my heart on my sleeve

and you I did love so.

Our days so cushioned in blossoms

our hearts as warm as the sun

rays reaching out to others alone.

A strength so great

from deep within

like carrying along on life's tides

To my heart I listened

while

my head said no!!!

Obstacles overcome!!!

Rough paths to smooth!!!

Emotions from a true heart

so flowing

a true love

so deep.

I called from the hills

in echo

'Oh how I loved you so!!'

Some words

from you

gleaming with a sharpness

so piercing!!

So vicious!!!

So cruel!!!

so heartless!!!


The truth arises so slowly

as each volcano rises

and

rises

to

overflow!!!

while today

I face up to

signs

that had been there

from the start

but the love I'd felt

was so beautiful!!!

How could it have been so wrong?

Life's lessons so powerful

and

are hard to take

when we love with all our heart.

My heart so deep so sincere

but

matched with one

so shallow

so doomed

so grey!!!

I cry as I cling to your shadow

I should have noticed from the start.







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      Janine Huldie 4 years ago from New York, New York

      Eddy another beautiful poem by you. I have to tell you this one reminded me of the past relationship I had before meeting my husband. It was doomed from the start, but just couldn't help myself. Thank you so much for sharing for all those who had indeed gone through this, including myself. Have of course voted and shared all over.

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      Rich 4 years ago from Kentucky

      Eddy -

      Unfortunately, the heart often rules, either when young or when desperate. These are times that care should take priority, but usually does not. Sad, and sometimes dangerous, but for those that survive, a lesson learned and not to be ignored. Beautifully told!

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Thanks for yest another great feedback. I think that so many would be able to relate on here.

      Thank you so much ;your following and friendship mean so m,much my friendship.

      Eddy.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Thank you so much rcrumple your feedback so greatly appreciated.

      Enjoy your day.

      Eddy.

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      Shauna L Bowling 4 years ago from Central Florida

      One sided love affairs are truely painful, Eddy. You did a great job of bringing forth the emotions of a broken heart. As always, the photos are exquisite accompaniment to the poem.

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Eddy sweet friend.. Almost happy birthday in a few days right? I wish I could be there with you and help celebrate your birthday.. if I leave now I can make it..lol

      this is so beautiful my dear and the song is perfect with it..

      I so enjoy your writing especially on a Monday rainy morning. makes me feel so nostalgic.. I love it.. blessing to you today have a wonderful day

      Debbie

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Thank you so very much bravewarrior for your loyal following and great comments. Here's to so many more for us both to share on here.

      Eddy.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Oh Debbie you are such a sweet friend as well as being an inspiration for me and many others also.Yes if you put your running shoes on now you may just make it to my birthday.ha h ha!!

      Have a wonderful day my dear friend..

      Eddy.

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      Jobb Gosamo 4 years ago from Philippines

      Now I know why those who love greatly suffer greatly. Like you I, rightly or wrongly, give my all till there's no more. It may not be fair, but that's the price to pay. I too wonder - a few seasons of joy then a lifetime of sorrows ...

      Very passionate poem

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 4 years ago from Reno NV

      Always an experience from beginning to end. Thank you again for sharing. Jamie

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      Joyce Haragsim 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

      Eddy, this wonderful sound so true and painful. You are our greatest poet. That has so many fantastic words running through your head.

      Voted up awesome and beautiful, Joyce.

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      Valleypoet 4 years ago

      When our hearts rule our head we are usually heading for a fall...a sad and heartfelt poem Eddy, thanks for sharing :-))

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      Bill Holland 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

      I will sit by you any day of the week and twice on Sundays my friend. Another beautiful piece about the illogic of the heart and how it often overrules common sense. I think we can all relate.

      Peace and blessings to you,

      billy

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      Rosemary Sadler 4 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

      A lovely set of poems Eddy. I think most of us would be able to relate to this. We let our hearts rule our heads and blindly head for disaster.

      Take care

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      Audrey Howitt 4 years ago from California

      Eddy, you just know how to put together the most beautiful hubs!! We should all take lessons!

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      Vinaya Ghimire 4 years ago from Nepal

      Eddy, what a wonderful and inspirational poem I'm reading in the morning and beginning a new day.

      7:53 AM, Kathmandu

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      Martin Kloess 4 years ago from San Francisco

      Thank you for this lovely journey down one of the rivers of love.

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      Nithya Venkat 4 years ago from Dubai

      Beautifully expressed and enjoyed reading. Voted up.

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 4 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Eddy, your writing may be about shallow waters, but it expresses a depth of feeling. Bless you.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Thank you so very much Bong.

      Eddy

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      It is always appreciated when you stop by and leave a great comment.

      Enjoy your day.

      Eddy.

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      Eddy I sill sit and read with you thanks for the share my friend :)

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Oh Joyce thank you so very much and here's to so many more for us both to share on here.

      Eddy.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Thank you so much Valleypoet.

      Eddy.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Oh Billy as always so nice to see you've stopped by and left a great comment as usual Here's to so many more for us both to share on here.

      Eddy..

      Eddy.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Thank you so very much Rosemay.

      Eddy.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      As always Audrey always a great pleasure to see you stopped by and left this great comment.

      Eddy.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Thank you so very much Vinaya and enjoy your day.

      Eddy.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Thank you so mcuh Mhatter99 and here's to so many more for us both to share on here.

      Eddy.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      So glad you enjoyed this one Vellur.

      Eddy.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Thank you so much Blossom and your words are so greatly appreciated.

      Have a great day.

      Eddy

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      I am so glad to see you Frank and your comments are always so greatly appreciated.

      Eddy.

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      Thomas Silvia 4 years ago from Massachusetts

      Thanks for the very enjoyable sit by you it was very peaceful and a beautiful read !

      Vote up and more !!!

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Thank you so very much kashmir.

      Enjoy your day.

      Eddy.

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Beautiful collection of poetry. Enjoyed reading it..... Sometime little sad, but so true if you fall into that situation.

      Thanks, voting up!

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      b. Malin 4 years ago

      Hi Eiddwen,

      Lots of Beautiful Raw Emotions in your Poetry...Very Poignant indeed. I could feel the Sadness, it's a Learning Experience on both sides...Shallow Waters, says it all.

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      Dianna Mendez 4 years ago

      Very expressive on how love sometimes becomes a tangled confusion of emotions. I do love your photo adds to the hub, very nice.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Thank you so much LaThing for taking the time to read and comment. Here's to so many more to share on here.

      Eddy.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Thank you b.Malin youir words so appreciated.

      Take care and enjoy your day.

      Eddy,

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Just beautiful Eddy. Voted up and awesome. Loved this the words, pics and video fantastic. Love bring s about so many confusing emotions that sometime one doesn't know whether they are coming or going. Passing this on.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Thank you so very mcuh Gypsy and here's to so many more for us both to share on here.

      Eddy.

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      Graham Lee 4 years ago from Lancashire. England.

      Hi Eddy. Another beautiful hub, complimented by your lovely series of pictures.

      Graham.

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      Suzette Walker 4 years ago from Taos, NM

      Great hub, Eddy. The poetry is beautiful and heartfelt. And I love the photos and video that accompany this piece. You've done a beautiful job on this series and I am enjoying reading it. Thanks for sharing with us!

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      picklesandrufus 4 years ago from Virginia Beach, Va

      Boy, sure remember what that sadness feels like. Maybe I would have felt better if I had been able to express my feelings like you have in this hub! Simply touching and beautiful!

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Thank you very much Graham.

      Eddy.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Thank you Suzettenaples and enjoy your day.

      Eddy.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Thnak you pickles amd enjoy your day.

      Eddy.

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      Brenda Barnes 4 years ago from America-Broken But Still Beautiful

      Indeed many of us have been right at such a place. The song goes wonderfully with the mood of the poems. The entire Hub is melancholy and lovely.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Thank you so much Brenda and so glad you liked this one.

      Eddy.

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      Karen Silverman 4 years ago

      Sigh...such a sad, sad time to have to endure - and yet - don't we all at one time or another?

      Beautifully expressed, Eddy - unsurprisingly..

      sharing..

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      aykianink 4 years ago

      Pretty cool series, Ed. Good stuff.

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      Shining Irish Eyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

      You have the unique ability to describe so deeply the many facets love; including the broken hearted moments. This is so spot on and I have found myself saying "You saw it, why you didn't listen to your own advice"?

      But we don't always choose where the heart goes, unfortunately.

      You are such a talent my friend.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Thank you so much ImKarn,

      Eddy

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Thank you aykianink

      Eddy.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Your word and hubs always so appreciated shiningirisheyes.

      Eddy.

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