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"Crime" Part 1
Murder Mystery
My heart was a flutter
the first time I saw you,
like a million butterflies
trapped inside my chest,
longing to be free.
The first time,
I laid eyes on you,
I swear,
my heart skipped a beat.
And in the blink of an eye,
you were gone.
Not a fingerprint,
not a footstep,
not a mark,
not a trace
left behind.
Not a hair from your head
out of line.
The day you murdered me...
You left no proof of the crime.
No leads to go on.
No suspects to blame.
No clues to this puzzle.
A mystery you remain.
To be continued...
- "Crime" Part 2 Mystery Unsolved
A 3 part poem - "Crime" Part 3 Mystery Unraveled
A 3 part poem
© 2011 Nikki Wicked
Comments
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Thanks Ed. My birthday is tomorrow but thanks in advance!
Hi Nikki , sorry I haven't been here more to enjoy your writing and photography , You do amazing stuff my lady !........Happy birthday !..Ed
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Thanks Jackie, its a continuation poem. Follow the other two links for the rest of the story here. These are some of my fave writes. I like how they came out. Thanks for stopping by!
Very good, sorry I missed this one! ^
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see I told you it was my favorite lol thanks blaise!
Not a hair from your head
out of line.
The day you murdered me...
You left no proof of the crime.
-I'm speechless. This is the best from the three.
The only mark left is in your heart. Wow Nikki, i love this. Almost like letting one love you is the painful touch unseen. Can't wait to read more.
Johnny Love
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busy at work and stuff. just tried catching up on hubpages.
Wonder what you've been up to, Nikki.
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there may be a part 3 bumpsy.. :) thanks, and thank you too fay. expect the unexpected or expect nothing at all.
Well, I certainly didn't expect murder. Very creative.
voted up
Intriguing and can't wait for the next episode :-)
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good morning hubbers. astra thanks so much for that comment, lol damn the torpedo style eh? cool. glad you like the pic. as skiface and mrdspade call it cheesy lol
Do i have something against cheese, why no Nikki, i like cheese burgers, lol..
Damn fine!
I loved every line of this...
A barnstorming arrangement of amazing criminal mastery. LOL. I love the lines "...The day you murdered me...
You left no proof of the crime..."
That is just great. And making it a crime just makes it all the more pronounced. I love your damn the torpedo style of confronting the thing. Oh, and I love the new pic too. Heh.
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you got something against cheese!?? lol
A continuation describing a life i'm all to familiar with, yes this is intoxicating, Nikki, cheese on, cheese on, lol..
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i will be posting a continuation of this today.
Nikki, crime indeed is a topic i ravage in, seductive read..
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and how are you feeling bella?
Very nice Nikki!! I really felt this one in my gut! Or maybe cause of the way I am feeling right now!!
smiles :)
bella
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its really both. it was love at first sight, but she never saw him again, and it killed her, metaphorically speaking. she would spend her whole life looking for him, but had no idea who he was. just a face with no name and nothing to go by. and she wasted her life away and never loved anyone else. hmm perhaps i should do a part 2 of this...
So now I'm wondering if this is a love lost or one of those chance encounters. When you only see someone, feel an instant attraction and can never forget them.
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thanks for visiting matt! stop by anytime! yes romance mysteries are the best elizabeth, and this was a case of love at first sight, but the guy did not see her or (maybe he did too but couldnt stop) either way its like he turned a corner and he was gone. perhaps she will never see him again, which is the crime, how he kinda "murdered" her, nothing from my real life doug, just came to me yesterday so i went with it. i wanted to portray the moment like it was a crime scene investigation.
Ouch, harsh and realistic. You never hesitate to open up.
Like the new pic. It's more... you. Cheers.
Awesome, I love mysteries lol :)
I like the waterfall-type writing style too and a really great poem.
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hehe i know i all cheesed out. thanx
Very creative Nikki, i never get tired of your writing style, but missing that original pic...
Nice cheese pic though, lol.
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