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Dating Lesson 9.1328325 – Know Your Surroundings (limerick)

Updated on December 7, 2013

While picking up girl at a bar

My friend said I’m going too far

My mind still a blur

What next would occur

As ceiling fan her head did mar


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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Sounds like a short ceiling off a tall pier.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Gotta be careful how high you lift 'em

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      Victor W. Kwok 4 years ago from Hawaii

      Never underestimate your strength!

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      kjforce 4 years ago from Florida

      Mhatter99...After viewing your profile appear to be very slick... and I'm sure this is not the first time a girl lost her head over you...enjoy the night.....

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      drbj and sherry 4 years ago from south Florida

      That super high lift must have provoked discussion,

      As the young lady suffered a skull concussion.

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      Ruby Jean Richert 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Oh no!!

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 4 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Ouch! She won't be your fan any more!

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      DJ Anderson 4 years ago

      I like this one.

      Can definitely see that happening! LOL

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      FlourishAnyway 4 years ago from USA

      Ouch. Funny one!