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Did I Say I Took Kids To Park (limerick)

Updated on October 13, 2015

I took kids to park every day

And there in the sun we would play

We’d let dreams unfurl

And let fancies twirl

Until the cute girl went away


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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      But Daddy, I don't want to leave the park now! Ha ha ha... too funny!

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      Bill Holland 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

      If ever there was an incentive, that is it. :)

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      Faythe F. 4 years ago from USA

      LOL..didn't expect that last line....too cute.

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      Darrylmdavis 4 years ago from Brussels, Belgium

      Thanks for the much-needed laugh :-)

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      travmaj 4 years ago from australia

      I think I have heard this somewhere before - grrrrrr.

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      Jools99 4 years ago from North-East UK

      What? You mean you weren't giving you kids 100% attention :o)

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      wetnosedogs 4 years ago from Alabama

      Great one. You are so good at this.

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      Now the kids you were with were they your brother's children that you were watching? wink wink....:)

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      breakfastpop 4 years ago

      You are definitely the "gift" that keeps on giving. Voted up and funny.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Funny one..I won't tell!!!!

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      Shauna L Bowling 4 years ago from Central Florida


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      Michelle Liew 4 years ago from Singapore

      Ack. Now this I will keep a secret! Thanks Hatter!

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      ohhhh the last line is was quite a twist as always....You are fantastic then never before. Shared and voted up.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Oh how I loved this one Martin and vote a huge' up up and away!'"!!


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      Jennifer 4 years ago from New Jersey

      So very funny!

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      Karen Silverman 4 years ago

      she is most definitely a cutie pie! too

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      Mary Craig 4 years ago from New York

      So humorous and oh so true...any kid will do ;) Loved it!

      Voted up, funny, and awesome.

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      At least you're honest!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      This was delightful. Some men!

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      Insightful Tiger 4 years ago

      Ahhh and she's gone... Let's go! hee hee

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      drbj and sherry 4 years ago from south Florida

      They say that into every life, some rain must fall.

      Maybe cute girl will return and be willing to 'play ball.'

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