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Etches
Etches in the sky~
Naked barked trees~
Bare they be. ~
Stripped of all their leaves~
Nude exposed~
Engraved in the blue, blue height~
Only a sketch left for this pro.
Unclothed~
For all to see~
Cuts into the soul~
Nothing left to impede.
All the lushness gone~
No obstruction for the sun~
Only an etch in the sky~
Slowing Mother Nature down.
By
Lisa J. Warner
AKA
Lisa Luv
CopyRight11/10/2013@LisaLuvLLC
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Eiddwen ,Phyllis Doyle,Gypsy Rose Lee, & teaches12345 so nice of you all to stop by! Thank you so much for your kind comments... May you all have a lovely Sunday! Have a blessed day!
This is a great way to portray fall. I can see the meaning visually as I read the poem and the photos are a great add to the words.
Absolutely beautiful. Love the pics.
Lovely words and lovely images. I enjoyed reading this, Lisa.
Wonderful Lisa; loved it and voted up.
Eddy.
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Thank you very much ---both ocfireflies & PDXKaraokeGuy---it is such a blessing for me you both came to read... and it warms my heart your kind comments... Enjoy your day!
Way to go Lisa. Nice work. Enjoyed this a lot!
It is always a contrast to see the vibrant colors of fall give way to the naked branches of winter. Such true and descriptive imagery. Beautiful. V+!
Kim
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word55 ,kharismacey,Mhatter99 Thank you so much for stopping by...May you all have a wonderful day!
Beautiful! thank you
Beautiful. Thank you.
That was wonderful Lisa Luv. Beautiful scenery too. Makes you look forward to winter coming where I am.
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Thank you whonunuwho ....Have a wonderful day!
I enjoyed the poetry and art work. Thanks so much for sharing.whonu
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