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First Love Revisited

Updated on January 24, 2013


I loved you then as I love you now

Three decades have since passed

Yet you have always lived in my heart

Secretly and quietly like an owl in flight

Cupid’s bow has flown into the night

And struck me in the full moon’s light


We share memories which only to us belong

We remember the times we heard our song

After all these years, we can taste the tears

Shed for the loss felt as we parted ways

Leaving behind those teenage loving days


Now in middle age we sit as friends and reminisce

About those carefree times our love felt so intense

Never again did we experience such loyalty and dedication

Nor did we feel the same degree of lovesick devastation


I loved you then as I love you now

We have but life's scars to share somehow

But our natures have remained, we are the same

We were 18 hoping for the world to change


We met, we gasped – our faces showed not our age

We remembered our history and never forgot our names

You became a leader and prospered in your adult life

I became an adventurer who often encountered strife

But here I am, an aged warrior who in the end did survive

And encountered you once again as souls always require


I loved you then my friend, as I love you now.

There exists for us no earthly space or time

I was your first love as you were mine

So we cannot be but forever tied

In heart, in spirit and in mind.


© Copyright Maria D'Alessandro 2012. All Rights Reserved.

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      Graham Lee 3 years ago from Lancashire. England.

      Hi scrittobene. How wonderful to have met again after so long. Something I think so many of your readers might secretly dream of. Lovely and so insightful.

      Graham.

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      Live To Write 4 years ago from Phoenix, Az.

      You are welcome and worthy of many accolades for your writing...

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      Maria D'Alessandro 4 years ago from Melbourne Australia

      Laurinzo - thanks again for appreciating my writing

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      Live To Write 4 years ago from Phoenix, Az.

      This one was so beautiful ... I had to revisit it... very nicely done

      and I love the good, romantic feel of it...

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      Maria D'Alessandro 4 years ago from Melbourne Australia

      SMonaghan119 - many thanks.

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      Sean 4 years ago from PA

      I very much enjoyed this, loved the imagery, followed so much like a story. Emotional and captivating message to follow your heart, it was beautiful. Well written.

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      Jim Higgins 5 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

      This is a very beautful poem of love and loss and memories of that love. Reading the comments confirms the truth of it, and I hope love is rekindled.

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      Maria D'Alessandro 5 years ago from Melbourne Australia

      @ Shruti - thanks for visiting my hub and for your fan mail.

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      shruti sheshadri 5 years ago from Bangalore, India

      Beautiful writing, I love the repitition , creates a very pleasant effect!

      voted up :)

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      epigramman 5 years ago

      ....annd whoooo sez me cood madicne ss fecting judmt.

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      Maria D'Alessandro 5 years ago from Melbourne Australia

      Touche' Epi......LOL

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      epigramman 5 years ago

      ...and who says that my cold medicine is affecting my jjjjugmint....$%#

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      epigramman 5 years ago

      ...actually my first love was a man .....but I need not say more about that one .......

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      Maria D'Alessandro 5 years ago from Melbourne Australia

      @ Gypsy -Oh yes it is romantic and touching and it's little things like this which adds a magic to life.

      @ Tom - Thanks for dropping by and please excuse my eccentric colleague Epi for his fractured humour.

      @ Epi - please lay off the cold medicine you're on - I think it's affecting your judgment. However, you can still churn out literary masterpieces and your rave reviews are always welcome here. Would I be right in saying that there are times after a swig of cough mixture that maybe you wished I was your first love? Hehehehehe - now that's some Aussie humour for you.. ;)

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      epigramman 5 years ago

      Oh please correct me if I'm wrong but I was thinking of another 'Tom' - yes , Tom Dylan , the younger (and far prettier, but less talented brother) of Bob.

      Whoops.

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      epigramman 5 years ago

      ......Tom says it all - sounds like a love of yours, is he not?

      Well I'd better clear this deck just in case VM shows up with his noble heart and his string of pearls and words and just add one more word to Sir Tom's discreet comment: "Very nice indeed."

      lake erie time 3:03pm

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      Tom 5 years ago

      Very nice.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. This is so touching, so romantic and just wonderful. Passing it on.

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      Maria D'Alessandro 5 years ago from Melbourne Australia

      @ Deb - thanks for commenting and I'm glad my poem awakened some special memory for you.

      @ always exploring - Thanks for dropping by - so true that we never forget our first love. Some of us have such fond memories.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      First love, we never forget, eventhough you go your separate ways, you still remember. I can relate. Beautiful..Thank you..

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Maria.. I am so glad to hear that you saw your first love.. that is so exciting.. first loves are special.. I love your poem very special writing. touched something in my soul my friend

      hugs from Tennessee

      Debbie

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      Maria D'Alessandro 5 years ago from Melbourne Australia

      @ Laurinzo - yes this poem is based on true events. After 34 years I went out on a dinner date with my first love. What a surreal night talking about old times and realising how similar we still are to who we were as teenagers. Our natures have not changed much I guess. We are merely older and wiser now and able to redefine our personal philosphy on life based on our life journey.

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      Live To Write 5 years ago from Phoenix, Az.

      This poem expresses love and loss, and the joy of finding it again... it is as fluid as a great poem should be, and yet it tells an incredible lovestory

      If this is a personal song ... what a Lucky Fella he is scrittobene

      and I love happy endings!!!

      Voted up for it's monumental beauty and realism

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      Maria D'Alessandro 5 years ago from Melbourne Australia

      @ dghbrh & @ Senoritaa - many thanks for dropping by. First love is the strongest felt but in turn, so is the intensity of pain which comes inevitably at the time of separation. It is a remarkable and surreal experience to encounter one's first love later in life - and to acknowledge that in some cases, love never truly ends and one's suffering in youth was not in vain.

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      Senoritaa 5 years ago

      I can feel the love and the pain of separation through the verses. Well done. Nice topic!

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      deergha 5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Love through ages to grow more strong and deep with maturity....nicely painted with much love. Really wonderful work....voted up and awesome with shares:-)