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Gentle Soul

Updated on September 4, 2012

Crying out

For a gentle soul

Someone to share and love

Make me whole

Come save me from this

Torturous hole

A lifetime within

Came with a toll

When I get out

I will find you

I know you are there


For me

To rescue and cherish

The love between us

Will never perish

Wait my love

It will be soon

Twin flames

Till the end

Like the sun to

The moon


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      Debbie Pinkston 4 years ago from Pereira, Colombia and NW Arkansas

      Beautiful Carolyn!

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      cleaner3 4 years ago

      wow. I will wait for you gorgeous! beautiful poetry, I see you have takena different style! nice ....I like it.

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      The Frog Prince 4 years ago from Arlington, TX

      Nice work C. Check parish if you will. Just a suggestion...

      The Frog

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      Mark G Weller 4 years ago from Lake Charles, LA.

      Beautiful expression off longing for that one spirit.

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      mckbirdbks 4 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

      Very nice sentiment about the quest of the good in life

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Just beautiful Caroline. It's simply all about meeting your soulmate.

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      Karen Silverman 4 years ago

      Oh, Caroline...i hope you receive everything you wish for - and then some! BEAUTIFUL picture!

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      Caroline Marie 4 years ago from Close to Heaven

      @ Hi Debbie thank you. :)

      @ Hi Michael thank you. :)

      @ Hi The Frog thank you. :)

      @ Hi Curiad thank you. :)

      @ Hi MC thank you. :)

      @ Hi Gypsy thank you. :)

      @ Hi ImKarn thank you. :)

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      Rob 4 years ago from Bay Ridge Brooklyn NY

      Very moving and evocative,

      Well done,


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      Caroline Marie 4 years ago from Close to Heaven

      Thank you very much Rob. :)

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      Jodie 2 years ago

      We need a lot more ingsthis like this!

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      Caroline Marie 2 years ago from Close to Heaven

      Thank you Jodie. :)

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