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Haiku Poems: Kissing Prince Charming, Gravity and The Olympians
One Day My Prince Will Come
Girl braves mosquitoes
Desperately kissing toads
How very charming
The Olympians
Extraordinary;
National heroes shines bright
Powered by a dream
Gravity
Intoxicated
Smashed under the apple tree
beer meets gravity
Comments
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Jamie I do love haiku poems, but I've only recently started writing them, still exploring.
I love your new collection of Haiku's. They are so much fun and a great tool to work on syllabics with. Jamie
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Angela, welcome and many thanks for the visit and comment, much appreciated.
Truely fantastic!
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Angel, always good to see you, thank you for the comment and terrific vote. Hope you're having a brilliant day.
I love the whole thing in here..few words but so so loaded ! I voted this all except funny..
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Rahul, Praise indeed, coming from you, it means a lot. Many thanks and God bless.
brilliant context in these haikus! I loved them!
What a talent to speak so much in so little words
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Unknown, thank you for the visit and comment, much appreciated, I'll be coming round later to check out your new work.
Vidya, welcome; its very nice to see you, so glad you enjoyed it.
Ruchira, Always nice to see you, I'm very thrilled to know you enjoy the haikus, thanks for the vote.
Very beautiful haikus! Vote + and all!
Nice haiku... I thought of some fairy tale I have read long before, when I read the first one.. Interesting...Have a nice time..
awesome!
loved each one of them
voted up and sharingit across
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Max, Vinaya, Thank you both for the insightful comments, I'm so thrilled you enjoyed the poems. My best to you both
Your haiku are like old wine in a new bottle. I think frog prince is the best piece.
Awe, this is just so lovely =) Jo, I was feeling like I was turning pages, so much said, chapter after chapter, it felt like a book!
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Lesley, many thanks for the visit and comment. All the best.
Terrific haiku's - loved them and voted up!
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Wetnose, you've made my day. Many thanks.
Your talent is tremendous.
thanks tobusiness.. I had a Forest Gump moment :) bless you
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Voronwe, I'm always experimenting. Many thanks for the kind words.
LetitiaFT, so glad you liked it. Thank you for the comment and for stopping by.
Shiningirisheyes, always lovely to see you. Much appreciated.
Cool, Jo! Your angle is surprising as always. Liked the last one and the pictures. Yeah, some frogs only remain frogs as a friend complained once.
Simply beautiful. Such vivid and glorious words to go with the photos.
Delightful!
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Frank, more-likely to be my fault, should have wrote a small intro. Anyway, mosquitoes usually represents summer, girl is at a mosquitoes infested pond kissing toads and wishing for her prince charminag, us girls would face anything for the right one. And who else would be giving a mouse a piggy-back.
Thank you for the visit and vote of confidence.
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Hi Debbie, so nice to see you, thanks for the visit and the awesome. much appreciated.
yeah okay voted up :) that's me hiding behind ignorance because I couldn't understand the first haiku.. it made me feel stupid.. so again Yeah okay voted up
Awesome Haiku..love your poems..debbie
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