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Him He And Me

Updated on December 9, 2010

You remind me of me looking at me In the future.

Hand not even attached and still watching me holding

My self’s severed self while bleeding it was beautifully eerie.

Me standing there With ourselves all bloody as hell..

You should have seen but you didn’t that’s why I tell.

I wont whisper this Ill have to write it all down

We staggered there with the two of me and literally myself

I was smiling slightly as he cut out my other self’s hand

My and me and I all laughed but one of our mouths different

Our teeth where so bright and so shiny and they sparkled.

But not all of ours did One of ours was rather neon red.

It was kind of funny how the three of us just stood there

But when I cut my self’s own throat while me stabbed me

I knew we would never stop the three we were all fighters.

I didn’t stop stabbing when I started I just would not stop

Neither did he or him.

The three of us him and him and me our self’s

Viciously all rolling and soaking In my and our blood crying

It was hell our hell me In hell myself he in hell just bleeding.


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      David Walston 7 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      Hell is no more than an emotion a place of despair

      Even with out religon It exist on this earth.

      Created by our own guilt pain misery and even joy.

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      getmyback 7 years ago

      Your awesome

      so glad I am following you

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      Levi Joshua Kell 7 years ago from Arizona

      Thanks. I feel the need to go back and read that one again. Great stuff. Brilliant, bloody, pointed. brutal, and lovely. We loved it (me, myself, I, and the others).

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      blackreign2012 7 years ago

      good piece ~hugs~

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      poetlorraine 7 years ago

      so who is who and what is what...... and who can write and who can not.... you can.... love Brendax

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      David Walston 7 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      Thank You

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      Maria D'Alessandro 7 years ago from Melbourne Australia

      Courageous piece of writing!

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      Zac828 7 years ago from England

      That is really powerfully good.

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      truster 7 years ago from A Bed of Roses

      A terrible thing to have multiple personalities! You're always coming to your hubs to comment and you don't even know that it's you ! LOL

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      SummerSteward 7 years ago from Duluth MN

      Or spirituality is for those who've already been to hell? Great poem, lots of emotion, conflict and insight. Once again, thank you awful.

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      kimberlyslyrics 7 years ago

      You know I'm not a person who believes in structured religion but this wonderful poem reminds of the 'saying' that I myself, have to experience, which is;

      I had to go to Hell so I could see Heaven.

      Our Hell is what can give us our freedom from self. If we allow it.

      Tons of emotions brought up here, very moving

      Thanks Poet


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      alternate poet 7 years ago

      Bloody hell !!! LOL Passionate stuff! captures the inside of a skull in conflict nicely - and other stuff that I will have to let soak in slowly.